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When life challenges occurs, are you giving up?
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Oh fate,
let the will of heaven be fulfilled, no matter how rough my road is, there's a light at the end of my tunnel
Whatever fate has in store for Arnie Grey, would she give up or survive.
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To be honest, I feel like the story is like a diary rather than the novel. I'm quite confuse on what the story trying to tell aside from Arnie got bullied in all possible ways and her life being is so miserable. However, I should not judge to early since it is only the beginning. Since you are still new on writing novel I think you can improve the story telling and writing style that suit you in the future.
The story is based on a reality of a fictional character, whose life was mystery, what are the reality of her purpose, solution and what does fate has in store for her, let's enjoy this beautiful novel together
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Honestly, I'm confused by the plot as there's no smooth dialogue. It's like I'm reading someone's monologue. The synopsis could be improved because it says nothing about what's going to happen in the novel. The description in scenes is good, but again, it's like I'm reading a monologue.