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Whispers of the Forgotten Realm
Author: Gerald_Amissah_66
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A misty forest shrouded in mystery and ancient secrets. The trees stand tall and ancient, their branches reaching for the sky. Soft, ethereal light filters through the canopy, casting a mystical glow over the scene.
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Pretty clean story for a new author. Two problems for you to tackle though. 1. The decisions in the story are made too fast. One would usually expect panic. 2.It lacks depth due to the lack of details. You should fill the reader with more detailed explanations, no one will be mad at you for it, but that doesnt mean you should give too much information as it both removes mystery and limits imagination. All in all, it has some potential, if you continue at this pace, your book will enter the new ranks in no time