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Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
mustrum: This is most definitely a feel good story, and it is up there in quality compared to some other works on this site.
Unfortunately this does not mean that it's great, since there is a lot of **** stories here.
The main problem I see is that the author most likely practices a discovery writing and makes stuff up on the way.
For example the MC gets skills or useful items that are later forgotten and not used when needed.
There's a skill system in the world. What purpose does it serve is unknown, because MC can just go around and make whatever 'cool stuff' with ice she imagines even though it is not her skill, and apparently the stuff she does is for some reason more effective than skills (exploding/splitting/transforming/remotely controlled ice spears/balls/walls/ramps or whatever else).
There's a lot of things that are suddenly introduced even though it might have been important earlier (time dilation in dungeons for example).
Minor spoiler ahead:
What got me to completely drop the story was the MC killing some random bloke after a second auction just because he happened to have bought an item that she needed. He was not fighting or threatening her. He was just running for his life, being pursued by two thieves. There goes all the talk about her moral integrity and not slaughtering ppl for power I guess.Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
Release_That_Fire: I don't know about chrysalis. I'm about halfway into the novel and I would not recommend it. Credit to the author with the world building, minimal grammar error, but the mc and the plot just drive me insane. The only reason the mc is alive is due to him being shelter by a nuclear vault plot armor. The evolution choices just pisses me off, it's like the author looked at the comment section and avoid what people want. It happens every time so I'm pretty sure he does it now. Everytime, the audience is given info on the evolutions possible with some really strong and cool ones, the author make the mc choose the most illogical and boring one in the next chapter. Might as well not have given the options then author. It's like your father said he would buy a gift for you, between a computer, phone, and a light bulb, you asked for the phone because even though you really wanted the computer because it's more mobile and clearly come on who would choose the light bulb, your dad says "okay, son I heard you wanted the phone and the computer was a closed one" and chooses the fucking light bulb. The author also made me hate his "special" character immediately. The tiny ant is so annoying.
Tldr: the mc act like a ****ty isekai character (most isekai are ****ty anyway. shrug)Dead on Mars
Asdfgh: That was really helpful. Sci fi is the only genre that I can't digest, if done improperly.Dead on Mars
SamStrike_: "the first thing the MC thinks about when he hears that the earth was destroyed is that he's still a virgin" Oh god.. this already tell what kind of horrible comedy this novel has.Dead on Mars
LockYourHeartTight: I don't recommend this novel to the people of the Science Fiction community. The main reason for that is that it is unrealistic. You might find that funny, but it is very important. A story, any story, must have some kind of base ground to stand on or the readers won't be able to understand and make comparisons to it. A story is only a comparison to the readers current life experience to the life experience of the characters in the story. What this means is that in order for a reader to understand a story, they have to have at least some similarities.
I truthfully wouldn't mind this novel if it had some semblance of seriousness in it's writing. If it was more realistic it'd probably be a very good read. The way it is now, not so much.
The writing itself is counterproductive to the story it's trying to tell. Last human in existence, last man alive, yet for some reason there's no suspense, no *******, no reality to the story. It has no depth, and that's because the author decided to add a C3PO to it for slapstick comedy purposes.
Some people might look at the A.I. in the story and it's character interactions with the main characters and say that the author wrote it to act such a way to give some kind of psychological relief to the characters themselves. That the characters are in such a serious situation that some outside help is required to prevent a mental breakdown. I would say that they're grasping at straws.
I would say that for one simple reason, the slapstick comedy isn't designated only to the robot AI. If that was the case then I'd kind of agree with that line of thinking, but it isn't. A prime example of this is the fact that the first thing the MC thinks about when he hears that the earth was destroyed is that he's still a virgin. This is in the context of the main characters first internal monologue. Our first "meeting" with the character we're going to be spending the rest of the novel with. It's what sets the tone for the entire story. It makes a very poor first impression.
I could go on, but stopped reading at chapter 7. I couldn't rationalize the story any longer. If the reader cannot insert themselves into the story, into the situation the main character is in and rationalize the decision making that the character is making then that constitutes a failure of writing in my honest opinion. This goes back to the first part of this review, there has to be some kind of middle ground between the reader and the story. A bridge that allows the reader to understand and "imagine" themselves into the situation the main character finds themself in.
All of this being said, for serious readers of science fiction, this novel is probably not for you, it's lacking in rational decision making. If you're just looking for something to pass the time, there are worse things to read, at least until it goes premium and everyone drops it.Dead on Mars
GarlicNoodle: read like 80 chapters and let met tell you it IS One of the worst novels(maybe the worst) that ever existed.
No story just a tragic MC and his story how he loses every single **** he touches.
like literally every single thing he touches have the worst endings possible.
no cultivation flow just him working out **** to jump levels which is absurd and guess what that over confident son of a ***** just knows and accepts challenges that i will be this level by this day just becuz a certain day is going to come and i will use this particular **** and will become OP as **** only to go to new places and screw new people's lives.Nine Yang Sword Saint
TheYellowBird: I just don’t like the way the novel is set up. Seems like mc gets everything without working for it.
Otherwise, the story has no purpose. For example, leylin from Warlock of Magus World wanted to find the truth about everything and that was his purpose which made for an excellent read.
As such, novels without purpose are dull.Nine Yang Sword Saint
BobbyLaw: Is no one going to realize someone has already been translating this on this very site? The one that's been here is over 100 chapters long already.Nine Yang Sword Saint
The Divine Physician's Overbearing Wife: State Preceptor, Your Wife Has Fled Again!
Idle_Daoist_: This book is I don't know what to say other than average cliche and done a million times with a different occupation- but the problem is the author seemingly can't say names and so every character Non-han is 'Ethnic Minority #1-#2, etc' And to top it off its filled with racist remarks and annoying mid paragraph character thoughts that seemingly want to get to the end of the chapter so you then read the next chapter. I'm pretty sure this will go Premium at an insanely high price but it's not worth it. It's trying to be IRAS but doesn't come close and this book causes mere shame upon the Zhang Family.Path of Medicine With a System
Se7eN: Didn't the MC just berate the earlier robbers about shouting one's presence? Why did he do it himself???Otherworldly Evil Monarch · C311
Patha: Empty shell of a novel, no real medical knowledge, no real plot, no good pen skill. Well, go read Great doctor Ling Ran and not this crap. .........Path of Medicine With a System
Hnn17: This novel is unprofessional and unrealistic, doctors are highly respected and trusted and they want to save lives.
Author writes them into xianxia stereotypes personalities. You got a drunk director doing surgery, then an experienced doctor chen but acts like an arrogant young master that puts down mc. And you got a below average mc that barely passed his degree, without the improbable system he would be a crappy doctor with no practical experience.
And yet these 2 idiots are willing to let a grad fresh out of med school with such sh!tty grades operate on a patient. Chen doctor should have operated and guide mc through the process. Thats a real doctor, not lied about his hands shaking. Author writes such trashy scenes i cant read anymore.Path of Medicine With a System · C6
Tiphoid: I'm bored of this stupidity. Too bad, this novel started off pretty well.Monster Paradise · C40
PrimalKaos: How do we recognize signs of lazy/sloppy writting:
-MC becoming full of himself for no reason, bullying people and acting self righteous
-preventing people from doing what they can without giving proper or even an ounce of explanation
-creating 1D antagonist without characterization or real motives, just for the sake of showing how awesome the MC is when he beats them later
And here I thought this one could escape the infernal cycle of stupid cliché but it seems like my expectations were too high....Damn this one is of the top 3 here how can it become so cringy so soon???Monster Paradise · C40
: Average novel with poor editing. The only reason this has a high rating is bots. Hopefully when quidian remove this they'll remove the bot reviews too.Seized by the System
: Average novel with poor editing. The only reason this has a high rating is bots. Hopefully when quidian remove this they'll remove the bot reviews too.Seized by the System
VlyeWho: Was interesting for a couple of chapters till the annoyingly lazy MC kept getting in the way. Most of the chapters is filled with talk that could be shortened or cut out yet it's there for word count. Females keep being involved for some dumb reason even though no romance, System seems to be getting dumber as it allows him to become even more lazy and trick the system to being unproductive which goes against it.(bad writing) I don't know how someone that got a system to get stronger would continue to be lazy and play games and read when they have superpowers, he reads novels and play games that have powers yet doesn't care that he has powers, seems like a forced reason to be lazy.Seized by the System
ReiSakisaka: What the actual F, Almost all of the reviews are frikking BOTS! Don't trust this piece of crap..................................................................................................................................................................Seized by the System
R_P: Man you sure got guts by making a novel which only has 50 or something chapters as premium. I am dropping this novel Goodbye🖕. I really hate this website they make their novel premium without giving us any notice about it🖕.Seized by the System
Luiz_H: It's strange we are allowed to review a novel that has no chapters posted. Well, I will review the cover and the synopsis. The cover, crude as it is, made me think it's about football, but the cover in the raws are completely diferent, the typical fantasy chinese novel cover. The synopsis is surprisingly more usefull than the usual chinese novel summary and made me suspect it's a commedy. They should at least post the first chapter of the novels in this "what's next" section.Seized by the System
ultimate_boredom: Damn that sect full of ntr and bestiality.Seized by the System · C217
Is that how you express a sigh of disappointment in written form? Because I am feeling quite dissapointed right now.
So, to start off this quite long rant, by reading the title "Ball of nothingness", I instantly assume that this story will correlate to an ancient being full of wisdom, or at least something like a mindless monster assimilating everything in its path. However that hope quickly crumbled to dust and mercilessly crushed by a 50 ton hydraulic press, by the time I finished reading the first few chapter.
To give a somewhat brief summary, the protagonist is an average annoying as f child with too much power and authority over some incompetent false gods who are defeated by their own creation or in other words, gods who are BEATEN by MORTALS. Now, I understand why the author gives a childish personality to the protagonist, seeing that to give it an alien personality is a very hard and tricky thing to do. However, what rubbed me in the wrong way is the fact that it doesn't seem to be aware of its own capabilities, meaning, it starts off as a weak insignificant existence. Weak enough to be swallowed by what I assume to be either a pelican or a crane. Either way, it's a different story between spectating an abomination learning and an ignorant child learning. The former being a greater entertainment than the latter, but of course that's no more than an opinion of mine
On another topic, the gods. At this rate, I might say that I respect the humans more than I respect the gods. Aside from how utterly weak they are, the gods have bland paper thin character. Most of them are all about protecting creation, balance, human, etc. I mean, aren't the gods here are supposed to be similar to human? And what's up with Zeus being a stereotypical big buffoon? Also, have I mentioned they are weak? I mean, a sage god is barely an immortal, Buddha here is almost no different than a mortal, except mortals are greater than him, seeing they succeed in creating a God and apparently loves to wage war, in fact, that's what all mortal species should strive to be, an unbeatable war machine bent on devouring everything. And yet... As I read on and on, I realize that the mortals are not what they're hyped up to be, they're just your usual mortals, insignificant and utterly meaningless almost like how this entire story is meaningless, seeing that the whole story seems to be a power fantasy dream of a discount Azathoth full of interaction with cardboards of stereotypes characters.
But then again, this story is not composed fully out of flaw. For one, I don't have any problem with the grammar. True, there is some typo here and there, but that's negligible. An okay grammar means that at least the author still cares about their own work. So that's a positive I guess.
There's also the fact that the author doesn't have a horrible naming sense which is a plus.
And I would say that the world building is actually decent. The same couldn't be said for most fantasy stories on this site since they only copy stereotypes medieval or xianxia world, with slight variation. In other words most of them are boring and uninspired.
So... There's that. The point I'm trying to make is that I am quite dissapointed with how the story goes, but seeing that most seems to like this story the way it is, i do not expect any changes at all.
This marks the end of my extremely long rambling. Before that however, I'd like to apologize if this rambling of mine is too badly written for your taste or seems to be too uninformative and useless.
Finally, i wish you all a nice day.Ball of Nothing
SamStrike: Writing Quality = Good
Stability Updare = Really Good
But as for the rest.. Bad...
Paragon of destruction = Paragon of average
First point, MC doesn't seem to be logical at all, he threw golden opportunity to train just because he want to find a shortcut (that doesnt exist) or can't handle the training.
Second point, MC does stupid logical decision even if the best answer/solution is slapped at his face, he goes full retard because of plot (?)
Third point, the MC is AVERAGE, he doesnt have any talent whatsoever; what he has is the forbidden real, that from what is shown is not even that 'legendary', an example of a (my imaginary) scale:
Common - Rare - Rare+ - Epic - Legendary
The forbidden realm is only at Rare, or at max between Rare and Rare+
But the worst point is that 'this advantage' that he has on the forbidden realm IS USELESS; he has a forbidden realm that is only mentioned at the start of the novel and during chapter 50 from what I understood, and nothing. We know nothing about the forbidden realm, what it is exactly, what type it is, NOTHING, he doesn even use it; and we are already 100+ chapters in.Paragon of Destruction
_Nocturnal_: That was kinda harsh. Meant very poorly designed plot adcancement. Clear plot armor and such.Genius Seventh Prince
_Nocturnal_: Below average, very badly written. Many sections felt either plagurized or forced for plot advancement. I get that the mc is like a 5 year old kid, but seriously why does there have to be so many misunderstandings? Misunderstandings are rarely well used and usually just serve to make the reader very annoyed and frustratedGenius Seventh Prince
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