And after 20++ years you tend to take thing for granted and forgot a lot of things.
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yes you are correct. i missed that. will redo it thanks man
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Interesting read. Just an input. The dialogue between characters could be better.wish you luck
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Sure i'll look it up. cheers man.
thank you for the feedback though, nice knowing people actually take the time to leave input to my stories
APOCALYPSE REGRESSION: TOWER OF EXTINCTION
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