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Ugh, I can’t stand translators who put dumb notes in the middle of the story. Use footnotes ffs.

I had hoped he wasn’t going to stay evil. Every step so far has made little sense based on his knowledge. Getting disappointed with this story.

Considering his evil alignment I’m surprised he can just wander where he wants.

The fact that that soul thing can make ridiculous unbalanced and overpowered quests makes no sense.

Considering how traumatized he was by his moms cancer, he sure is making no effort to get her to a doctor

So far, I really don’t like the MC. Hope that changes.

This was the worst chapter to date. So much nonsense and random stuff that makes no sense.

So my take away from this chapter is that English is not the authors first language and he has no editor.

Does this story even have an editor?

Hopefully the editing stops sucking. So many errors and only a few chapters into the story.

Can’t even get the name of the snake consistent in the same chapter. Such great translation and editing.

Previous chapter: gnomes aren’t devoted enough so you can’t resurrect them. This chapter: let’s just ressurect them all, it’s fine.

So how long will this fire and ice dragon be remembered ?

This story should be reported for ripping off the readers and removed. Every chapter is just a rewrite of the previous chapter plus a bit of new info sometimes. Either the translator / editor is completely incompetent or the author is a complete hack.

So many issues. This story desperately needs an editor

I still have no idea why he is trying to hide his progress. It make zero sense at this point. Maybe it did for a minute after he had a big boost from the turtle but who cares at this point.

This story is so confusing at times. He hatched a fire and an ice dragon, the were forgotten about, mentioned, and forgotten. This chapter they talk about an intermediate castle upgrade but he is long past that and has a basic town already full of empty buildings. So confused by the constant inconsistencies.

2 chapters in and they can’t even keep the name of the MC consistent from paragraph to paragraph, this doesn’t bode well.

This story desperately needs an editor to proof read it.