Webnovel Author: Chev - Novel Collection

3yr

Posted

I can say you don't have a lot of editing to do within this story. Reading this so far has drawn me and wanting more. Only wish you can do a little bit more detail within your story and it would be even more amazing. Keep up the good work ^-^

Dream turns into Reality

Fantasy · amber0613

Chev

3yr

Commented

Interesting O.O wonder how the character going to use it.

Before goes on, I introduce myself. I'm Philip Jackson, a student at the University of Saint Louis. 16 years of age and my dream to be is a Businessman. When I was 7 years old, my grandfather gave me a weapon which is I didn't know how to use it. It looks like a slender stick or something called "baton". It has pure white and diamond stone on the top of the stick. He said that someday I can learn how to used this and change fate for others. I don't understand what he meant that day so I just ignored it and accept his gift for me.

Dream turns into Reality

Fantasy · amber0613

Chev

3yr

Posted

All you need is a great editor and this story would be amazing. Hope to read more .So please update 😁 Also hope everyone keeps supporting this novel 🙂 worth the read.

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Fantasy · isharislynkia

Chev

3yr

Posted

Hey everyone Author here. Dark Passion is my First every book I have written and hope you will fall in love with it. As much I love writing this story. Thank you for supporting my novel - Chev

Dark Passion

Fantasy · Chev

Chev

3yr

Posted

Hey Panda, great novel see alot of potential. hope you continue writing and see where this novel take the reader. believe you need to get a little bit of feedback or second opinion. to help improve your novel.

Fantasy Evolution System

Eastern · Readingpanda

Chev

3yr

Posted

great story. worth the read. keep up the good work [img=recommend] see alot more good story in your future. with a few things you need to work on, but other that it really amazing story.