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Esperare un poco más de capitulos para darle una oportunidad, por ahora le deseo mucho éxito. Bueno, ojalá escriba más rápido. .....................
Hey Panda, great novel see alot of potential. hope you continue writing and see where this novel take the reader. believe you need to get a little bit of feedback or second opinion. to help improve your novel.
Your book is very detailed it's nicely I don't read that fast but so far what I read was really good. You have a nice storyline going [img=recommend]
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First to write a review here! So lucky of the Main Character to have found the ring fir the unfortunate guy! His life will never be the same. If there is anything that needs fixing it would be punctuation and capitalization errors.
English is a 2.5 out of 5, it’s readable but you likely get a headache after about 10 chapters.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
The book is great, just changes in the English and works on the punctuations are considered... the buildup is nice tho... Consider working on the writing
Good novel keep it up but thete are some grammatical mistakes you should focus on them. Also try to regulate the chapters update of your novel at soon as possible because this novel is really enjoyable.
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