Webnovel Author: Kyosei - Novel Collection

there is a possibility of romance but it will only have a single female lead. This will not become a harem

Yes, I agree with you. Some parts of the story needs a complete rewrite since some are just very confusing that even I got confused when I proofread it. I already noted the chapters that needed complete revision and those that only need a slight revision so rest assured I am already working on them.

Thank you for the review. I appreciate the honest and thorough reviews like this. And yes, there will be future chapters that will show how the MC fight before in the past timeline. As for the parents, I didn't forget about them, I already made the chapter about the result of the investigation but it was not yet published and was sitting in the drafts for now. Thank you for the critical review, have a good day!

thank you for the review, yes I am aware of the inconsistencies and was already writing some of the chapter rewrites to at least get rid of what caused those plotholes. And thank you for enjoying the novel despite it's flaws, I appreciate it. Have a good day.

Thank you for the review. Don't worry, I am not offended and critical reviews are welcome. I am sorry that my story didn't go to your liking but I am thankful you have seen some potential to it. Thanks for typing a review and have a nice day.

Thank you for the review and for pointing out the inconsistencies in the novel. Since I am always busy with IRL matters, I have no time to review what is right and wrong especially in the beginner chapters. I was hoping some of the readers can point it out so that I can either change it or clarify it. Also, the grammar is like that since it has been a few years since I have written it and I have yet to edit the mistakes present. I was still a greenhorn at that time and English is not my first language. I also apologize you had trouble understanding some of it. Thank you.

it might change depending on the flow of the story and I think from where the story is in right now, it might proceed further than 250 chapters

Sorry but I don't write harem. Either I write a novel with only one love interest or none at all.