Man I hate stories that start with the ending. It's such a killjoy. There's no meaning to it. Literally remove the first half of this chapter and you have a great novel start with a lot of intrigue. Instead we get an ending that is meaningless because it has no context, and directly tells us that everyone ends up dying. Why? How do you invest into a novel that actively discourages you from investing into its characters. If it isn't the ending of the novel, then clarify that. But right now it's such a deal-breaker. I just hate novels that don't give you a chance to experience their story.
ch 0 1 Josh Malum
Urban · ClasslessAscension
I think I'm done with this chapter. The MC miraculously getting an item that just gives him all the information really tells me how this novel is going to turn out. Without the validation of effort and intent, rewards are meaningless. I had a look at some later chapters but barely anything happens with each chapter. It just isn't interesting. I haven't spent enough time to give it a negative review despite my feelings. But yeah, I'm done. A shame as I love novels like this.
ch 0 5 Entrance Exam
Games · Snoring_Panda
Yeah that could be a few different things. I have anxiety and my brain doesn't record much information when I'm out and interacting with people, so I won't remember faces and other defining features after a person has left. Even people really close to me I generally don't recall their looks. I couldn't tell you what a persons hair colour is. That might be a bit of my Aspergers as well though. There can be a lot of reasons why you struggle to remember faces. I don't think it's a big deal though, just something to keep in mind.
It was called prosopagnosia.
Urban · Blind Leek
I think it's comparatively. For an ordinary family, they're upper middle class. For pet trainers, they're poor. Which is why that their son now has a chance to be a professional pet trainer they won't have enough to support him.
It was a pity that Father Su's warlord pet died in the wilderness many years ago, and he himself had been injured then as well. Otherwise, the family would not be poor and he would have enough money to raise his son's pet.
Urban · Ooty
You're a star, Harry.
Beast Grade: ⭐
Eastern · Da Yu Is Fat Again
Wait a second, how conniving. Think about it. It's Zhang Ji's luck that he's become the little brother of the world's main character. His luck is working perfectly. How evil!
However, as he thought it through, he felt that such words weren't very suitable to be said to Zhang Ji. Zhang Ji had always depended upon his luck when he was outside! Zhang Ji could depend on luck, but he still couldn't.
Eastern · Sanmao Wu
I really love the realistic thoughts, it adds so much depth. People who say they don't have negative thoughts in these situations are hypocrites. You'll always react to something outside of your understanding of normal. It's how you choose to act that defines the type of person you are.
Jake awkwardly took her in his arms, princess carry style. Ruby was very light and bony according to his fingers' feedback where they touched her body. As ugly and handicapped as she was, he couldn't help himself but think how nice she smelled. It was a scent very different from the deathly one he expected.
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
good story so far but I find this chapter conflicting with the novel's premise. You set him up to be a talentless mage who through hard work and ingenuity manages to stand out. Now you've given him some kind of cheat, a crutch, which makes all that meaningless. It kills my interest in the story. Also there is a big difference between kindness and being a saint. One's a blessing, the others got problems with their head.
ch 42 Shadow
Fantasy · Avan
If you can handle the cringelord moments, and fedora-capped romance, there's a great story here. The world building is interesting, and the mystery keeps you curious. Unfortunately progression of strength follows problem -> powerup instead of powerup -> problem which is my preferred method of tension. Overall it's still satisfying, just held back a little by the author.
The Sacred Ruins
Eastern · Chen Dong