drasticmouse

3mth

Commented

Makes me think of Star Ocean

ch 0 1 The Beginning of the End

Overlord of Outlaws

Sci-fi · TheSilverQuill

drasticmouse

5mth

Commented

His "special" headset is a dead giveaway

"You players are so fragile." Karma chuckled and grabbed the hammer's shaft. He looked at the two hands that were still wrapped tightly around the shaft. He then tossed them away and took the hammer for himself.

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Fantasy · Alekzi

drasticmouse

5mth

Commented

I bet the protagonist is going to learn that soon.

"Creatures of evil, begone!" Flarehead raised the pitchfork above his shoulder. A very dim light appeared at the tip of the pitchfork, glowing bronze. "Inner Power!"

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Fantasy · Alekzi

drasticmouse

5mth

Commented

I see, he's a man of culture

After spreading butter and jam across the piece of bread, he filled the bowl with cereal and poured milk into it.

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Fantasy · Alekzi

drasticmouse

5mth

Commented

'Huh, another fracture? Are you made of glass? You are pathetic, brother...' A voice of his little sister echoed in his mind.

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Fantasy · Alekzi

drasticmouse

5mth

Commented

Ambrose felt his hair stand up as a result of the great danger heading his way. He made the first move that came to mind, and that was side-rolling.

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Fantasy · Alekzi

drasticmouse

5mth

Commented

That's what makes this so interesting. I don't know if it is truly realistic but this novel has really brought to light some details that physically disabled people have to go through, like when he had to be careful to not stub his toes while on his wheelchair when he wanted to go to the toilet.

However, since he wasn't used to running, it looked quite awkward at first.

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Fantasy · Alekzi

drasticmouse

3yr

Posted

Who said poems can’t be direct and still leave you bare. I had a short but enjoyable journey turning these pages and I recommend to anyone who has a clear night to dream away.

LETTERS

Realistic · lyniel

drasticmouse

3yr

Posted

I’ll write a more in-depth review when I get to follow up on this story. What I enjoyed most from this was the characters, hands down. They are given enough pause to come out of their own shells and speak directly to the readers. I didn’t have to let my mind wander to grasp their background and was still given room to find myself surprised by the small bits and pieces of revealing dialogue.