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King's Avatar? Shouldn't that be President Tao Xuan and Wei?
ch 0 1 Your Wei Family Is Truly Made up of Marvelous Individuals!
General · Iron Heart
Don't repeat 'morning' twice. I suggest maybe write it like this... "Nine o'clock on a Friday morning when the sun beamed beautifully, casting a golden glow upon the earth." Nah, that's just too dramatic. anything will do as long as you just remove one of the two mornings.
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Urban · Pryges
The overused of 'alas' word is getting cringy and annoying in my opinion. I suggest you limit your usage of this word, Author-san.
ch 0 9 The food must be good
General · BAJJ
I really think the author is a huge fan of Quan Zhi Gao Shou, considering all the names of the ESports characters mentioned in this novel.
ch 0 6 Bombarded the Entire Internet
Being A Shrew to My Ex-Husband After Our Divorce
General · Iron Heart