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Okay, this is cute story thus far. The characters are fun and cute like i read it all in one go, noe i can't wait for more. But, there were some mistakes, though minor, it would greatly help your readers if you could clean them, like typos, punctuation marks and capitalization. I hope you won't drop this book. More power author!

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Cute.

Athy jumped down from Loki's arms and ran forward, making me and the others run after her. When we turned at a corner, I could hear voices whispering and saw light coming from a distance.

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Thanks for the update. ^.^

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What?

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