This is a Lana Lang that left Clark because of the secrets and lies. she simply wants full transparency, not to mention she simply cares
"Why?" Lana looked at him with her beautiful green eyes. "If he had something to do with your kidnapping, I want to be there," Lana said, narrowing her eyes.
TV · MrGodlyGod01
I can't tell you how to feel about the characters. Lex can seem passive he has the answers but he doesn't do anything with them. that's because he refuses to let fear make the decisions for him. I didn't realize it earlier while writing this story but he won't judge Lana for what she might do. Destiny is something he's currently fighting against hers isn't set in stone. Don't judge her for what you think she might do, she'll make her mistakes, and she'll learn. Just as Lex will, because this story has growth. At least I think it does, disliking the characters is fine. We can all tell what kind of character Lana is if we look at superhero stories. the hero always gets the girl, but is Lex the villain of this story?
Well Done!
There are a couple of reasons for the rapid growth. One I was likely reading or watching something that had a similar plot point. But that doesn't mean there was no thought behind my decision. Two, I needed the Lycan transformation to mean something. To differentiate Lycans from Werewolves. Elias was originally supposed to go through three transformations. Right now he's the equivalent to a cub in Lycan standards. I could go on and on. I implore you to go about sharing your opinions in a more positive manner. Looking at your comment history you succeed in breaking authors/ stories down but rarely attempt to build them back up. What's the point in only sharing your negative opinions?
In his place stood a 17 year old with the body of an athlete. Not only did the transformation age him it gave him the most optimal body and appearance. Elias kneeled breathing in and out falling to a prone position sleep overtook him.
Others · MrGodlyGod01
join the discord and we'll have an actual conversation
Lydia watch as he walked away, she thought she was helping him but as it turns out he ended up helping her. Honestly, she was tired of this facade doing her best to make idiots feel good about themselves. It was time she made friends, real friends that didn't mind her IQ level.
Others · MrGodlyGod01
Maybe no, except you said most people which means that some do? Have you observed every person with those qualities? No? Well I guess you don't have the credentials to critique a fanfic that uses it as a plot device.
Lydia watch as he walked away, she thought she was helping him but as it turns out he ended up helping her. Honestly, she was tired of this facade doing her best to make idiots feel good about themselves. It was time she made friends, real friends that didn't mind her IQ level.
Others · MrGodlyGod01
bro lol this is never going to be updated. instead check out my collection of short stories ja al ghul will interest you
Swolson?
Tien could swear he saw Raditz's pupils take on a tinge of grey for a second before he was pelted through the arena.
Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
not dropped just busy with college. sorry
You're right this will be fixed
Lex: Shadows Of Salvation
TV · MrGodlyGod01