Webnovel Author: Tarhuala - Novel Collection

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The storyline is solid, but the brevity of each chapter leaves something to be desired. Anticipating a new installment every day only to find it so brief can be somewhat disappointing. Additionally, some of the chapter beginnings lack a compelling hook. While the grammar is generally acceptable, there is room for improvement. I recommend thorough proofreading of each chapter to maintain immersion, as encountering grammatical errors or enduring a slow trickle of very short chapters can disrupt the reading experience.

The main plot takes off in Chapter 4 when the protagonist acquires their system. The overall paragraph and structure are quite commendable, maintaining consistency in grammar and dialogue. I highly recommend it.

The story kicks off with a captivating start, shrouded in mystery surrounding the main character's past and identity. It unfolds within a captivating fantasy setting, and I must admit, I have a soft spot for fantasy stories featuring a blend of BL and an enigmatic, indifferent male lead.

The main character in this story is a skilled hitman/assassin. The plot is compelling, the storytelling is excellent, the grammar is flawless, and the word counts and chapter lengths strike a perfect balance—neither too long nor too short. The paragraph structure is well-crafted. Interestingly, the main character harbors a desire to retire.

Wow, I initially read this without much thought, but it's surprisingly excellent. It reminds me of many Korean novels I've read, with its captivating writing and engaging plot. It won't be long before it receives many positive reviews as well.

The average word length per chapter seems just right—not too long and not too short. The character development is excellent, but I've noticed that each paragraph tends to be quite long. You might want to consider splitting them to make the reading experience smoother.

There's a lot of world-building in this novel, but the author has thoughtfully included glossaries to explain the meanings of certain words. The use of symbols to separate scenes also makes it very reader-friendly. Overall, it's a fantastic book!

Wow, this story knows how to grab its readers! I was totally blown away each time I scrolled to the next chapter. I've already binged all the available chapters, and I'm definitely coming back for more.

The novel exudes the atmosphere of an action-packed detective story, firmly rooted in 1989 Japan. Death is a recurring theme throughout the narrative. If you have a penchant for this genre, it's definitely worth a read.