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I can't stand this, I just don't like the way the characters are and their interactions. They seem to me to be very forced and unnatural actions for the context surrounding the time and place. (traductor)

I can't read this chapter, I skip it to the part where it's in runeterra (traductor)

This chapter is disgusting. It's been a while since the author is focusing on the physical figures of the female characters and leaves the plot in the background. At least there is no harem. (traductor)

If some secret and scientific group wanted to study or use MC, it would be interesting and logical if they were offered a paid contract, with weekly hours. Obviously due to the plot he can have a confrontation with a secret group for trying to retain or kidnap him only for Mc to tell him at the end "they could have paid me to study me" or "if you know what I am, and unlike the hulk, I have brain, we were able to reach a mutual agreement" (traductor)

It would be interesting that the mc left children on the way, and that their descendants (with some unique trait) form a millenary family and among them, some are immortal or have prolonged lives of 400 or 1000 years. Thus making a new supernatural species of white hair. All this to create new plots and expand the background of the world. Hopefully it won't be the typical Twilight fanfic cliche, where they arrive at Forck Village, fall in love with one of the Cullens and leave all the development of thousands of years behind. Translated with DeepL.com (free version)

It would be interesting that the mc left children on the way, and that their descendants (with some unique trait) form a millenary family and among them, some are immortal or have prolonged lives of 400 or 1000 years. Thus making a new supernatural species of white hair. All this to create new plots and expand the background of the world. Hopefully it won't be the typical Twilight fanfic cliche, where they arrive at Forck Village, fall in love with one of the Cullens and leave all the development of thousands of years behind. Translated with DeepL.com (free version)

Me gusto tanto este capítulo

Thanks for responding, I'm abandoning this fanfic

Harem, Yes/No? Please "no"

Gracias por el capitulo

I remember that Aron had a sister that he secretly murdered for fear that the three leading heads of the Vulturis would split up, causing the severe depression of one of the three and causing his wives to be "locked up and drugged so they wouldn't complain". I don't know if it was before or after their war with the Romanian clan. The MC could save the sister, prevent Aron's "evil" course, Marco (one of the 3 main heads and husband of Aron's sister) would owe the MC a big favor, and the other members of the Voturi clan, seeing Aron's treachery, could kill him, lock him up or expel him from the clan. In the end the wives of the three heads would take control of the clan. (traductor)

Gracias por el capitulo

ok. esto no es para mi. lo abandono