Mera-Mera in Game of thones

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Gh0st00

update is not regular chapters are too short you can easily put two together to make one chapter it's going to take months of real world time for any progress to even happen with how short the chapters are and with how unstable the updates are

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Daoist3tDTa4

more chapters pls and I think love interest should be Daenerys

LV 4

SrLao

Writing Quality (3) Updating Stability (3) Story Development (2) Character Design (2) world background (1) You can read and understand the writing. In the time since a few chapters have been released, I assume that I have just started and it does not seem that the author will abandon any time soon. I found gaps when he says how when he says he knows what powers he has, how he knows about the "genetically perfect" improvements in his body, how did a common person (from the modern world) come to have a strong conviction of desire for power and dominance? As for the substance, I didn't feel it. It was as if I were walking a path and there was someone (let's say "plot") who pulls the strings and decides when and how the MC has to think/do. Not in a way that doesn't feel natural to me. Good luck to the author and I hope that this negative criticism is useful and not a simple annoyance (translator)

LV 14

VonBritannia

stprys literally perfect so far. you just need to update more as its very ling between chapter.

LV 4

Andrey_Play

(^_^)

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Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee