toothpick

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toothpick
toothpick
2 years ago
Commented

Gostaria de ler uma novel onde o Lorde Youdu fosse o protagonista! Diversão infinita!

toothpick
toothpick
2 years ago
Commented

One problem: When Jake is in the sixth or seventh ordeal, if he finds an individual who is still in trial 0, but who comes from a very talented civilization in battle, he will catch up to Jake's progress in just days.

toothpick
toothpick
2 years ago
Posted

É original. Vale a pena ler, e tem poucas situações clichês, apesar de não ser uma história incrível, eu ainda recomendo!............................

toothpick
toothpick
2 years ago
Commented

Também estou disfarçado de pobre...

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toothpick
toothpick
2 years ago
Commented

O final desse capítulo me trouxe memórias constrangedoras

toothpick
toothpick
2 years ago
Commented

Mulher trabalhadora! Ótimo começo

toothpick
toothpick
2 years ago
Commented

I don't know who the girl was, but just in case I would throw a Pokeball at her, will that....

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toothpick
toothpick
2 years ago
Commented

Esse primeiro capítulo foi bem escrito! Espero que continue o bom trabalho

toothpick
toothpick
2 years ago
Posted

It's a well-written story, and the main characters are satisfactorily developed, however, the number of chapters seems to be unsatisfactory for the author to be able to extract the full potential of what has been presented so far (until chapter 40, which is where I left off) . There are also some uncomfortable little points to read, but hard to imagine, like the fact that the protagonist has been a virgin for 100,000 years, or simply the age of the characters (the youngest so far is 400 years old), the protagonist is 100,000 and his wife 200.00... I can only imagine an elderly couple, even if they look young. In the end the story is good, the negative points are small and don't interfere with the experience, I just wish it was a story with a bigger development (and with more chapters!), but anyway I'll keep reading until the end, until now I recommend it!

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