NetoXIII - Profile

Boring... man, I really liked his interaction with Malia, other than that the MC is very annoying... for me the excuse that vampires are like that didn't work... if he was proud and more bloodthirsty ok, so would he He doesn't have to be a psychopath, but he is very passive and disinterested in everything, especially his Buddhism policy is very boring too... Whoever lets his girlfriend go to a party alone... He is asking to be betrayed, when you start to Doing separate things is likely that you will find other people with the same taste, since your partner is not interested, especially if this becomes frequent

Your mentality of accepting low chakra reserves instead of looking for solutions to increase chakra is irritating...Other than that I'm loving your story

very good, I can't wipe the smile off my face when I read it, I just hope he doesn't leave Tsunade alone in the war

It's disheartening, he's very cowardly, instead of training to increase his chakra reserves, he'd rather waste his talent, man, if you didn't want him to fight, choose another world, I'll keep reading just for the romance and I hope you get it fix your cowardly personality.

ok, I'll give it a chance... I was traumatized, there are many stories where they separate for whatever reason, it ends up getting boring for me

It was very good, but this interference ruined everything for me... there is also the fact that it will take him a while to find Kumoko, we had high expectations for their meeting, and when that happened they didn't even spend 5 minutes together... I think I'm going to abandon it... but still, congratulations on the work, the idea is good and everything, but I don't like these separations.

a protagonist who limits himself to destiny is so annoying.... if your mana is low, train and increase it or make a potion or something, don't make up an excuse saying that you will become skilled, especially if you want to be an enemy of the main character, who in addition to having high mana reserves, is also a genius...

a support fruit would be interesting, not for him, but one that would allow him to help his friends or family

I don't know why, people don't understand that regenerative abilities, especially high-level ones, prevent old age.... I found his lifespan a bit disappointing, especially for someone who says he cares like his family does, when he dies and is reincarnated again or stay in limbo, he will lose his family

the system change for Raphael was disappointing.... I liked the previous two IA

Thanks for the chapter. The interaction between him and Gwen is very good, it makes the story very interesting... I just have a few points that bother me. The first is the shield's incompetence. It's not possible for a spy agency not to connect the dots... the king of crime, he came to better conclusions than the shield... and this incident with his henchmen, seriously he thought it was luck??? every time someone comes close to his identity he suffers a brain aneurysm, it's not possible.....he looks like Superman with his magic glasses

I'm the only one who finds it annoying, him just watching without doing anything