LordHermes

There are not a lot of novels that I enjoy reading. But your stories always hit the good spot for me. This one is the same; you've set up an interesting system. I haven't seen anyone think of using the River Styx before. Keep up the great work!!

Beautiful starting. Absolutely love Priscilla and her little stupid charms. Never thought I would read something that wasn't fantasy, but here I am. Now to drop a well-deserved review. Waiting patiently for the next chapters...

A beautiful story, not what I would normally read but it's a nice change of pace. I strongly recommend you read the story and I assure you that it won't be regretted.

While the idea certainly is quite interesting, even for me who loves trashy fantasy stories, I just felt that its not the best it could be. In the inner monologue it feels quite repetitive hearing ''I''. Overall I think this is quite the good story and look forward to how future chapters will pan out!

I actually do use grammarly. The reason there a re mistakes in the story is because I use UK English spelling instead of US English spelling

I'm glad, Imma hit the bed. I have written about half of the next chapter so I need some rest lol

I would strongly recommend people keep a close watch on this story. It has the potential to become the next big story. To have a story being written at the same time as this worries me a little about my work. I am glad you are working hard on this! Keep up the good work!