Webnovel Author: LordHermes - Novel Collection

A beautiful story, not what I would normally read but it's a nice change of pace. I strongly recommend you read the story and I assure you that it won't be regretted.

While the idea certainly is quite interesting, even for me who loves trashy fantasy stories, I just felt that its not the best it could be. In the inner monologue it feels quite repetitive hearing ''I''. Overall I think this is quite the good story and look forward to how future chapters will pan out!

I actually do use grammarly. The reason there a re mistakes in the story is because I use UK English spelling instead of US English spelling

I'm glad, Imma hit the bed. I have written about half of the next chapter so I need some rest lol

I would strongly recommend people keep a close watch on this story. It has the potential to become the next big story. To have a story being written at the same time as this worries me a little about my work. I am glad you are working hard on this! Keep up the good work!

The world background is very detailed, some may say it is an issue but its I think it's good to know what there is to know. There is plenty to read in every chapter and there are so many of them. If you need to keep an eye on an author I think it's this one. This story will blossom into something incredible before you know it!

Thank you thank you. The reason its wordy is mainly because it was originally written in the style of a novel, not a webnovel. I just split up the original chapter into two. I promise future chapters won't be too heavy to read unless its something important!

Thank you for your advice, I will take it into consideration !

I am writing this just so I can really talk about some stuff here. With this series, the inspiration behind it came from me wanting to escape reality. And I had dreams about fantasy type stories, so in the end I ended up putting all this in a google doc and boom. I am honestly glad at the progress I've made on this so far. At this point I have published chapter three and I can confirm that the series will evolve into something never seen before! Thank you for your support so far!

Not really, I think its going perfectly so far!

These are some of the kind of stories that I like to read, and I'm glad that this author chose to go down this path. It is very interesting and easy to picture the scenes in your head. I recommend it to anyone who is interested!

I mean wow, this story is just perfect. I love the way everything is described and it creates an image In your head. I recommend this to anyone who is interested!

I read the synopsis and instantly went to start reading it and I was not disappointed! The concept is right up my alley, the chapter length is quite nice and easy to read if you are short on time. But don't let the shortness of the chapter disappoint you as the grammar and the wording manages to create a beautiful image in your head. I hope to see this series reach the hundred thousands of views and get the recognition it deserves!

Beautiful story. I don't usually read this kind of thing but I found myself captivated by it. The amazing wording really created a imagine of what was happening in your head. I am excited for future chapters!

It is quite well written and the plotline is quite interesting. I usually read more fantasy like stories but I've seen so many interesting stories outside of that, this is one of great interest. Keep up the great work!

I quite enjoyed it, I would recommend this story to people who are looking for a new potential big hit. I hope it does well in the WPC! Overall, great story!

Not my usual cup of tea, but I quite enjoyed it. It quite easily unfolds and makes it very easy to follow for just about anyone. I look forward to what the author can do in future chapters!

Fantasy is my favourite genre, coming into this I had high hopes....And they were exceeded. This story has beautiful imagery and amazing worldbuilding. I can't wait to see what this blossoms into with future chapters!