The One-Man Army

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Li_Suzue

The story is exquisite, It was really an interesting novel also a powerful writing indeed I'm excited for the next chapters will come the author is really good I'm so impressed🤭 what a wonderful novel

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Sjsnwhnxshsh1

The story is wonderful. It is still quite new, with only three chapters. The description is detailed. The plot seems interesting. Good job!!!

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JI_Ah44_LEE

After reading the first chapter. Oh I got stuck-up. The book is wow! I really love fantasy romance novel and this made me love it more. Author you did a great job! I recommend this book guys. All I'm waiting for is the book update! Please update faster!

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Cynical_Stranger

You have grammar mistakes here and there. Maybe try Grammarly or get an editor to half with that. While the world of this novel seems pretty generic the way you present it is pretty interesting. Keep writing and improving!

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Rayne_Rue

Yes it is in it's early chapters there's a lot of potential in this novel and hoping to see this book go further, I will support this book till the end hope to see more updates on this book, Keep it up !! I love the plot and the character design.

I loved the whole story so far . I recommend everyone to read it. I liked how the author described each and every situation so magnificently. Every part of the chapter was very beautiful. As you keep reading this book, you become curious and the more you read it the more you enjoy it. Elated to read this book and I hope the next chapter comes soon <333

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bunnyrabbit

I’ll talk about the synopsis first. I like that it’s short, concise, and direct to the point. A synopsis doesn’t have to be five pages long. I also like that the author included his update schedule though I would honestly prefer it to be daily. But anyway, let’s talk about the chapters. If I will have to describe it, it’s poetic. The author has a way with his words. One thing, the author had beautifully executed the “three chapter rule”. With just reading the first three chaps, you’ll already have an idea of how the story will proceed from thereon. Keep it up!! -bunnyrabbit

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immortal_shizu322

quite an exquisite story, fresh plot and the perfect world built, gonna wait for upcoming chaps author, u must keep on updating it regularly

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rydertheking

A good 4 star novel. Issues here and there, can't really explain it much but it feels very heavy to read you know? Perhaps it could be the amount of words in every paragraph. Overall however, for a newbie this is great. can't wait to see how it goes.

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chery_cabral

So far, story wise, I felt so cringed reading on the first two chapters but this got interested on it afterwards. Please practice proper sentence fragmenting while editing this story. Thank you.

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Stormzz

It's a strong opening few chapters. You learn a little about the world, you see the strength of the main character and the start of the story has taken shape. Pretty good so far

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Lancee

The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.

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lingchenxi

I came here from the synopsis thinking it was just a regular romance book, but reading through the first few chapters captured my interest. Beautiful worldbuilding! it's really an interesting story and I hope to read more from you.

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Culmination

Very interesting concept, just wish there was more to read! Keep working at it, I can't wait to see where the story goes and what developments occur. You have a very interesting world and characters established already.

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Yoroshee

Although it's still in the early chapters. I can see great promise in this novel. The writing is good and the plot seems interesting, looking forward to future chapters.

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Brian_Hanes_117

The story development is great, the grammar is solid, the description is much better than most Webnovel stories, and the narration is spectacular. Seriously, this story has the most entertaining narration I've seen in a while. I didn't notice any major flaws with this story, perhaps a few corrections have been made since others reviewed it. The only thing I might have held against you is there aren't enough updates, but I won't. Feel free to look at my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey".

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LordHermes

I am writing this just so I can really talk about some stuff here. With this series, the inspiration behind it came from me wanting to escape reality. And I had dreams about fantasy type stories, so in the end I ended up putting all this in a google doc and boom. I am honestly glad at the progress I've made on this so far. At this point I have published chapter three and I can confirm that the series will evolve into something never seen before! Thank you for your support so far!