I agree entirely, but I felt like I needed to introduce a rework to his quirk bc if he can just swallow everything like Kirby, the fight scenes won't be that entertaining. The short version is when he gets hit by anything modified or created by a quick, he can absorb some of the energy from the strike. In the exam he didn't fight anything with a quirk so it didn't activate. My idea was to rebalance him so that he has to release pent up energy from taking damage or else he overheats and passes out. I just raised his skill ceiling but tell me if this makes sense
ch 0 5 New Abilities
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First of all, the time skip is necessary cause I don't want to drag through five years of a kid being trained as an elite assassin. Nothing much would happen and it would just leave people bored. Second, maybe I could have done a side plot where he goes on a mission, but I thought having the house attacked was a good way to demonstrate a power base. Third, the mc doesn't have a 1 billion bounty. That is Kikyo, his mother, who was the target of the mission. Fourth the Zoldyck family doesn't have guards on the outside, so you could just go over the walls or through the main gate if you are strong enough. And as for Silva being on a mission, Idk information can be bought.
ch 0 2 Reunion
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No, that was me filling up the word count, don't worry. He's not going to be moaning every time he's hit, lol :).
ch 0 1 Woes of Life
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Maybe or something like that
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ch 64 Explanation
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don't worry there's still a chance
ch 60 Swing and a Miss
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ch 55 Planning a Heist
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ch 45 Student Vs. Master
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I'll be the first to admit this is my least favorite chapter in the book
It was a shame that she wouldn't join my crew, but they were other fish in the sea. Besides, I got her devil fruit. Turning around, I scratched the back of my head, "Damn, I didn't know I had that big of a problem. Maybe I should see a shrink? Nah."
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don't worry things may change
ch 35 The Beginning
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fixed thank you
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tama won't be important to the storyline
Tama stepped out from her hiding place a started at me, "Who are you?" I smiled at the small girl, "My name is Soren. Your name is Tama, right."
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Soren doesn't want to forget his past, he sees them as a symbol of what he's gone through and survived.
No one knew about my past as a slave. It's not as if I was scared of them finding out I didn't want to have that conversation.
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It's fixed now thank you for telling me
ch 18 Prove Thy Self
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Soren will have his own crew in time
ch 17 On The Road Again
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MB will fix soon
MHA Incubus
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