Help I need help, LOTS of help
2020-05-16 Joined Global
Welp another chapter next chapter coming out soon so yeah btw if anyone reads my novel can die son say anything it would rly help my conscious the only thing keeping me goin is FiraTheElf who voted 86 god power stone so a big thanks to you :3 hope you know your the only motivation left wow it’s like talking to my own pal all over again, I still wonder how she looked heard she was form France well nvm bye guys and thanks!
ch 19 W-Wait he’s NOT a protagonist?!
Fantasy · Pandoras_Actress
Np I just felt like searching it up
I don’t even remember when I wrote this
[Cool Father Tavern System, will help you in managing a tavern and giving you quests to complete. The rewards may vary to cooking skill, recipes, strength, manuals, and the likes.
Anime & Comics · ChocoCrinkols
Yeah
ch 17 Love? Or forced Plot?
Fantasy · Pandoras_Actress
Just read it myself and was visibly confused never knew I could write so bad bad but you should continue cus it dose t get better but at least it doesn’t get worse...I think
The thing moved forward again saying "yes child I hear your concerns, but be patient all will be answered soon enough was pleasantly surprised as it seems the thing that I will now call god doesn't seem to be hell bet on killing me like I previously thought and thank god for that or maybe I should just thank the god in front of me... I think.
Fantasy · Pandoras_Actress
True
So far ive liked the concept I can see a lot of potential in the novel my main problem is the pacing is a bit weird but its fine, another problem is that its a bit cringy but the author is still new so I wont criticise, keep up the good work
Undying Reverence
Fantasy · Skydiving_Possum