So far ive liked the concept I can see a lot of potential in the novel my main problem is the pacing is a bit weird but its fine, another problem is that its a bit cringy but the author is still new so I wont criticise, keep up the good work
Omg man this novek is so good only bad thing is that there are not enough chapters
I especially love the concept its so unique i cant wait for more chapters
So far ive liked the concept I can see a lot of potential in the novel my main problem is the pacing is a bit weird but its fine, another problem is that its a bit cringy but the author is still new so I wont criticise, keep up the good work