oh my gosh i am so stupid... sorry
Okay, anyway thank you and good luck with your personal life
ch 0 1 Prologue: The Dark of Day
Sci-fi · REMUS
Your notes were really helpful. Since English is not my native language there might be some flaws here and there and I want to apologize for that. Also we don't have an editor yet so if you are interested in test reading, we can stay in contact via discord
ch 0 1 Prologue: The Dark of Day
Sci-fi · REMUS
thx for your help. i appreciate it a lot
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Sci-fi · REMUS
What I like most about the novel is that the storytelling has a very clear structure, even though there is the obvious goal to find her father the story has taken some interesting sideways so far, that fit the humorous tone of the story very well and keeps you reading, even if the search doesn't make progress that fast yet.
The Whisper In The Ice
Fantasy · TrinityPhoenix