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Totally in love with the plot. (≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦) First of all the MC telling about the Engineering and Medical fields is a real life problem but when added it to the novel it makes it more interesting. Next about the first person narration, it's damn good, my reading experience was very smooth. Now about the magic and math part I somewhat find it a matching of two different entities. But that's what makes it intresting. Good Work Author. Keep it up. Also update more. (◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)
very good book, I was surprised to see fields of science matched with magic and this type of isekai story but surprisingly it is working very well. the narrator perspective is interesting, keep it up
I really like the concept of the novel! Math and magic aren’t elements that I’d expect to see, and as kind of a nerd myself haha, I love how that was portrayed. The background of the world was well written and explained. My only primary suggestion is that sometimes it spontaneously switches to present tense, and the shift distracts a little from the writing. Other than that, great work!
Great writing quality, and the words and reading experience is very smooth and flows well. Engineering and magic? Genius! In that aspect it reminds me of "City of dead sorcerer", but isekai. Very different from the norm and I do recommend.
This novel is the most amazing novel that I have read so far! I was really looking for a novel that could bring me to the sky just by his words and sentences, but now I had found it! I love the novel! And I'm itching for more chapters! I want more chapters!!!
Greetings to the author! Where do I start? Writing the story in first person was genius actually, it was a smooth read for me. And I love how you were able to fix math (my favorite subject actually) and magic together, brilliant! The tittle is catchy as well and I love how the MC develops. Kudos and keep writing!
A good read, The pacing is not too fast or too slow and the characters are interesting. The author is interactive with the readers and that is pretty good thing. I will definitely recommend it
Definitely a good story with a very good start. I hope my novel starts with a 'Bang' as well. I recommend this for everyone. I challenge you to read at least the First Chapter to test
I've never read a reincarnation story before. But I like the dynamic between the two sides. I wish they could get along. I wonder if there is a deeper reason for why the powerful side mistreats the weaker side, but I won't know until I read more. Also lol, I like the twist that she is reincarnated on the weak side, not the strong side. 👍
I typically don't enjoy these kinds of stories, but I really enjoyed your story! You have a really captivating way of writing that's unique. keep it up! <3
This is the first time for me to read a reincarnation topic novel with non-Asian background. Also, the rebirth is not going to the past or the future but to another realm. This is interesting and a must-read novel for those who love fantasy genre. I don't know why but I kind of imagine the characters in this novel wearing clothings like those in Star Wars movies :) :) Keep up the good work, author! :)
My first five-star review! haha I really like your writing style. The words flow very smoothly. It is easy to understand and digest. I also really like Crimson's personality and inner monologue as they are consistent. I also really like how you created a unique relationship between Cream and her parents in just a couple of chapters. I also love your worldbuilding and how magic works. All in all, this is definitely a great read!
I took science in 11th and 12th and I suffered a lot. The amount of time and hard work that it requires drains you. The fact that the MC shifted from engineering even when he was good at it is hard to swallow down at first xD. The interactions between God and the girl are nice to read and a really cool concept. An interesting read. Well written story and plot. All the best author!
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A blacksmith girl? First time seeing it here. It's pretty nice and I love the interaction btw God and her and her fanatically pessimistic view in first chapter. It has potential. Big time and I want to see that to the end.
We have the same genre when it comes to magic and medieval tropes. But I must say this is fairly intriguing story. Updates are no problem whatsoever, as well as writing quality, although story development seems a little slow because from my perspective the first three chapters are important into gathering the attention of the reader. It kinda lacks the eye catching part, no offense. Character design is quite nice as your writing style directly shows how each individual move and react to one another creating a sense of emotion from them. Overall no problems, would definitely recommend so please keep writing! Hope This’ll be helpful.
This is not my cup of tea, but the text block is well written, life is the most important thing that a person has and to encroach on it is the greatest stupidity that a person does. A person is generally some kind of weak being if he does not have an understanding of the world. Emotions in the text are shown well. it seems that the division by three squares in the second chapter somewhat disturbs the reading rhythm. But this is only a subjective assessment. And so a very interesting story!
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I love this genre so much and seeing the unique way you created this story makes me happy. From what I've read so far it seems very interesting and unique so I have to give you 5 stars and hope you continue writing.
A really good novel with a mix of re-incarnation and magic. Liked the idea a lot, being a huge fan of re-incarnation novels. Keep up the good work!
Interesting way of reincarnating, the author is really fluent in the story, and I am sure that it will become a masterpiece, recommended to everyone with a love for fantasy.
A reincarnation novel in first person narration. I like how the author develops the relationship between Cream and her parents. The conversation with the god is interesting. After shifting from maths to med, only to come to another world filled with magic and mathematics again. I feel as if the Mc got a chance to choose maths again, in a more interesting way. The character design is good and I don't find faults in world building. Although the progression of the story is slow paced, with a good plot, this could be a great webnovel.