This is honestly getting boring. We've been in the 5th grade for over half a year, and the same thing keeps getting talked about over and over again.
You've come a long way, Fujin. It seems like just yesterday that you swindled Hiruzen out of a sword.
For a few moments, Baki felt a sense of helplessness. He didn't see any way to counter such a strong jutsu. In fact, he wasn't even sure whether Rasa could stop this technique. The fact that the enemy village had a sixteen-year-old ninja who could go up against their Kage and possibly overpower him was extremely difficult for Baki to digest.
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
"It will break your heart," she begged.
Book&Literature · Drkest
I hope Asha survives, you know she wasn't that bad. There were plenty of innocent slaves on the islands anyway. I hope they were saved somehow.
That doesn't make any sense. What do the Manderlys and the Reeds have to do with the Ironborn? Are they going to cross the entire West Coast just to attack them on the other coast of the West Coast? Would you believe the Glovers or the Mormons, but please, at least before writing such nonsense, get informed.
The North was also hit but the Manderlys and Reeds managed to defend against them.
Book&Literature · Ash_D_Born
It's about time for a time skip. At least until the Greyjoy rebellion and that would last at most 5 or 7 chapters, from there another jump to at least before the start of canon. Too many chapters have been dedicated in a time of only 2 years since they arrived in Westeros. If this continues this novel will never end with so much filler.
The real question is how does the spy know it's a hook?
Just like Mabui, Hiruzen and Shikaku also received a scroll from a messenger bird. It was from a spy they installed in Kumogakure. As he read the message, Hiruzen smiled and said, "The Raikage has taken the bait. He left Kumogakure."
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
Does anyone offer any explanation?
"...CRIMSON SKY!"
Anime & Comics · Drkest
The truth is, I think it's time to release the canon. It doesn't make any sense right now. Fujin is already strong and he can start to change some things for himself. If it does not follow from the canon, we will only see the naturo series again with some changes here and now and from another perspective.
I don't really know. I don't have time to write about the real world, and university doesn't leave me with much time. But it wouldn't be a bad idea to go back to it. Only time will tell.
Chrysalis
Fantasy · RinoZ