Not a fan
Really good. Engaging and an interesting plot.
Honestly an Amazing story. Love how the power levels are done and how you’ve handled character development and power development with Apollo and the rest. With how the story is developing it has a lot of potential and doesn’t seem to be even half way yet. My only complaint is the upload schedule as I’m not sure if you’ve said anything about it but it’s been a month without a new chapter and there isn’t any consistency when you do upload so I hope that changes but looking forward to the next chapter.
This was a good serious but this rose thing kinda sucks. You basically made her way more powerful than she would be after killing a god and just given her plot armour. It would be better if you just got rid of her already or took her out of the story till a later date because now all your doing is having her kill people while she is basically invincible. Otherwise though I’v loved the series
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
I dont think anyone should be treating animals as their *** slaves😂
Even if the child was very interested in these little monsters, for an average family to risk buying a $500 "toy" that for some reason might not even work was out of the question.
Lucifer's Descendant System
Fantasy · Zhanye
My only problem is this guy is upposed to be a genius bUt youve made him seem like and idiot and a coward most of the time. id suggest laying back On the surprised and panic moments and make him showcase more strenth.
Absolutley love the idea and hope it continues to go far. like the fact that no matter what he never wuite reaches the pinnacle and evertime he gets close he discovers power scaling far above his
Absolutely libe this book. even after 400 pages im still hooked and cant wAit for the daily chapters. keep ip the good work and ill keep reading.
Loving the book so far. Feels a bit weird though that yet again someone close to Godfrey has fallen in to a trap despite them knowing who cains clones are.
Others Summon Dragons, I Summon Legendary Knights
Fantasy · DD_TheDreamer