An inspired newbie writer
2020-09-04 Joined Indonesia
Thank you!
thank you
nice opening chapter, however, there's a view grammatical errors. But I am hooked.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Executed
Fantasy · uhjuihoijio
the king's eye didn't what? this is incomplete sentence.
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Fantasy · uhjuihoijio
thank you dear
thank you, I love your book too!
I can't imagine a man is wearing a corset, so I think your world is purely fantasy like game like fantasy
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Fantasy · Dumpling_Aunt
I love main character with whip as a weapon, most authors used sword
Not long after, a lady dressed in black with a purple cape arrived in that same place with a group of people following behind her. Holding a fiery red colored whip in her hand, she said with a wicked smile on her face, "Sovereign Althea, let's see how long you can run"
Fantasy · Dumpling_Aunt
please delete the repetitive :D
Chapter 1 Death and Rebirth
Fantasy · Dumpling_Aunt
I don't mind an opening begins with an action scenes, but this was a little bit too long, which make the phase a little bit slower. But overall, the grammar is perfect, the story was unique and interesting, and as an MMORPG player, necromancer is my favorite hero.
ch 0 1 The beggining
Fantasy · Zerga3
are you trying to make me as a slave?
The second goal is to be able to write approximately five thousand words every day. Simply speaking, you must be able to write quickly.
Urban · WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL
yes, I will
How to Survive Your Mate's Rejection
Urban · FluffyFatCat