Hey, I'm Pomu! I like writing fantasy novels for fun. Welcome to my whimsical and steamy world of laughter, pain, and hopefully enjoyable story-telling. ^^
2020-09-09 Joined Japan
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Prologue: The Memories
Fantasy · Ellucid_Dreams
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 2 The Day We Started
Urban · ExQuartz_Roachina
Typo my bad. Will fix it. 👍 Thanks for letting me know. 💙
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Fantasy · Pomu
Great, well-written first chapter. Gonna read some more!
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Corny.
ch 0 1 Assassination
Fantasy · JALLEN
You're absolutely right. Little oversight from me! Thanks for catching it. Should be corrected now. 🙏
As I inhaled, I envisioned the mana particles in the air converging toward me, drawn to my mana core. With each breath, I felt the energy building within me, a gentle warmth spreading through my body. My core during these last 2 years had stopped expanding altogether, but the more mana I accumulated I noticed slight changes to its colour until one day, I felt a welling in my core, a sharp pain like I had never experienced before.
Fantasy · Pomu
Soon! I'm going over some quality control with the story. I currently have 3 parts in stock. More to come soon! Uni...is very busy also hehehe... 😭🐒
ch 21 Announcement
Fantasy · Pomu
In my view, the writing quality is consistent and effectively captures the story's events, emotions, and details. Adding more descriptive language could enhance certain parts, but overall it's immersive, particularly when exploring Argos and witnessing Leo's battles. The dialogue strikes a decent balance, though it can feel flat at times which the author can improve with time. It would be beneficial to focus more on showing rather than telling which is done a lot here. I also suffer from the same dilemma, so we're stuck in this together! The updates are stable, and while the 75 chapters are short at times, they are impressive. The story progresses consistently, but shorter chapters limit opportunities for deeper development. Leo's character growth is well-presented, and encounters with creatures add richness to the world. Great potential and can't wait to see where it goes with more time and work added to it. 4.4/5
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This novel is seriously well-written, like, the world the author made is super cool and interesting. It was a little slow in parts for my taste, but that's just me and I'm only 7 chapters in. There were a couple of sentences and word choices that I would've done differently for some extra oomph. But overall? Great read – definitely something different than the usual stuff you see on Webnovel. Cover's nice too. I'm not sure, but I think they made it themselves? 4.6/5 - Has a lot of potential.🤔
Hounds of the Cloudburst
Fantasy · Siamese