Webnovel Author: Harasamasa223 - Novel Collection

Neat story like it The things I don't like in the story development is that where Arthur say guns are useless in magic world and he can just teach him swordmanship author can you think of any better reason for him learning swordmanship because there so many better reason like make the Mc think swordmanship is cool so he want to learn swordmanship and many more he is just nine so make him act like nine

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If you read or watch anime Shonen or. Isekai they are more naive brainless don't say the Mc is brainless

Good good I don't know why there so many Shonen, naive genre defender🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔. ... ......................................... .............. .......... ... ...............

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Tailed beast or chakra it just feel so so cliché.

I gave this 3 star because I think it's so so cliché Like:op ability, konoha Bootliking mc😂😂😂 😂🤣🤣🤣🤣and because he have his own tailed beast🤣🤣😂🤣😂😂🤣😂and I know what fanfic mean it just so cliché that I feel funny🤣🤣🤣😂😂🤣😂and this just my opinion okay read it if you want to I just I think it sososososososososoaoaoao cliché🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂🤣.

Most greatest star wars fanfic good development and good character interaction ............................................................................................................ ....................................