Webnovel Author: CasuallyPolite - Novel Collection

Borderline poetic depiction of the xianxia theme, fleshed out with an above average grammar. The story and the main plot I mean, doesn’t leave much to guess and work the head about. Nonetheless, precisely as we, as readers, can see a clear goal when it comes to the direction of the plot… I can say that the author is doing great when it comes to providing us with a sense of fulfillment when things we aspired to presict do come to reality. Though generic overall, this book does have different colors to its world… Definitely worth giving it a read and earning a spot as one of the early, OGs in an upcoming heavy fan base.

The novel has quite the bumpy start with occasional typos and constant perspective switches. However, things quickly fall in line as the author reveals bits and pieces of the plot, events, and character interactions. There is little to be said about world building as this book features generic urban fantasty in addition to a player’s system. The little irony that a game character is now a player in the real world gives some food for thought, and I wonder if the author might introduce parallel realities down the line. The consistent perspective switch makes one feel as though no character is the main per se, but everyting eventually revolves around Rayn in one way or another. I’ve always liked harem stories, but I must say the romance in this one needs a lot of fine tuning. The psychological works at play, together with cheats such as charm, ruin the entire point of romance… It would be better if the MC outright hypnotizes the females instead of playing two faced and commiting deciet. All in all, I give this book 3/5, maleable for change depending on future progress!