I'm A. Valentine and I'm back. Daily updates for Clues You Left, you can read the other book but the newest is better. Remember to leave reviews so I know what to improve :)
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Fantasy · The_Celestial_King
they sighed*
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Fantasy · The_Celestial_King
the eldest*
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Fantasy · The_Celestial_King
I really like it. reminds me a lot of my MC
ch 0 1 Chapter One
Fantasy · eleonora
Grammar could use a lot of improvements as well as proper punctuation. Their wasnt much background information I picked up on, the character design is good and I didnt really understand the story plot, at first it was high stakes, then it was something else. Throughly confused
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I see no reason to censor the cuss words and if you do, make sure all letters are captilized or uncaptilized
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starting off strong with high stakes, I like it. but your grammar could use some work but grammarly could help with that
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when it comes to the transitions from one setting to another, you could use some improvement .but your way of writing is very nice.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 Strange Bright Star
Fantasy · Dumpling_Aunt
Its definitely a slow burn kind of book I'm going for, it is a mystery after all. After I hit my first 10k words, I'm gonna slow down my updates to once or maybe twice a week to allow breathing room when I take up a job. I put a lot of work into these characters, having written with them before which naturally led to character development. I'm proud of my work and quality of writing can always use improvements.
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Fantasy · A_Valentine