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2021-03-31 Joined United Kingdom
Okay, thanks for the suggestion. I will change my chapter accordingly - I am always looking to improve my work :)
The sun shone down onto my skin, it's comforting warmth penetrating deep into me. I ambled along, enjoying my morning walk to school. A cool breeze swept over my face which cooled me down. Today was just an ordinary Monday morning with nothing particularly unusual going on. I checked the time on my phone- I was late. So, I quickened my pace. I forced my way through the busy crowd on the high road and raced into a more rural area. Here, there were only a few people. I walked past a large clearing in the trees. There stood a large energy factory shrouded in darkness and mystery. I always pass it on my way to school. Usually, I never think twice about it. But after the announcement that I heard today, I briefly stopped outside as I considered the impact that it would have on this daunting building and those below. I noticed the faint smell of toxic gas lingering in the air around it.
Fantasy · Halfie_x
Thank you so much for this review, I really appreciate the feedback <3
Okay, thank you!! I will do that right now [img=recommend]
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Fantasy · Halfie_x
This story is really well written; the descriptions are great and very vivid. It is clear that you have spent a lot of time on this, and your prolonged effort will definitely pay off :) I look forward to seeing what happens next
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Fantasy · Lullabybao