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A lost friend, the corruption of emotion, a mental warp, a burning soul. A search for 8, a con-stellar race. A black void against three close friends. A blight which comes from one’s within, from a place that you only see in dark tales. Enjoy a journey of three as they venture through a world they once thought they knew.
Fear. Hope. Anguish. Joy. Desire.
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This novel is really engaging and promising. Your consistency, hard work and dedication really shines through in it and I can't wait to see what happens next. I will be adding this to my collection [img=update]
Quiet an Action packed story this is. Review Proper, Writing Quality: There are some g-errors but nothing much to cause not to enjoy reading the story. Story Development: The prologue start on the bond between Gao and Aichi then someone mysteriously abduct him while they are playing? If I'm correct. This already set the mood of the story. Then the Dojo grad, training and fighting leagues, many developments that would not bored the readers easily. The skills too are precisely described. Character Design: There are two characters that the author gave detailed bg story, Gao and Yue. This could make the readers focus more on how there life will grow and develop in the martial arts world. As for the other characters, there intro were not bad and maybe we could also learn more about them in the future chaps. Updating Stability: I see from the notes, that the author follows an update schedule which is good so readers could know when will the story be updated. World Background: Written Well. I see no problems here. Overall, this work is already a great read for me. I would keep this in my collections and see how the the mc's will strive in the martial arts world. Great Work Author!
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The first ten chapters are very instructive concerning Japanese martial arts, it incredible how much you learn from this novel, additionally, the story development so far is top notch!
The name of the story is really catchy. Your writing quality is good too. But the only problem I found is the synopsis. Don't you think it's too short? Maybe a little bit more information would attract more and more readers. Good luck!
I feel that this isn't ready for prime time. The translation is all over the place, with wrong words, incorrect grammar nand punctuation, and more. It is hard to get into the story with these barriers in the way. The author has an interesting story, but it is overshadowed by the poor translation/writing.
Overall the tone of the story is set from the beginning. I can't see any grammar mistake and the character has its own space when the chapters go forward. keep up good work author.
I really liked the author notes continuing side by side with novel. I'm interested in finding more about what happens further in story . Right from first chapter I am hooked in story. I was already taking side of aichi vs gao 100th match but turning point strucked hard. Waiting for more chapters by author...
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Writing quality is good with almost no mistakes. But the story development is a bit dull for me. On the other hand the characters and fight scene are awesome. Maybe you will be improving the story more in the future or it has something up in the sleeves. But for now we can only wait for more chapters.
Having read a few paragraphs, I can immediately tell that the author has poured his all. It was clunky to read at times but with few edits and finishing touches, the flow will become smoother. Congrats on your work and may your story become great in the future! BTW, I am from review swap.
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Unique plot !! amazing work author, well done!! World background is catchy and clear. Characters are perfectly set. Keen to see what happens next
This story is a five-star from me. Although the synopsis isn't attractive enough, but the plot hooks me from the prologue. The character design and world development are awesome. Good job, author.
This is a nice novel! The story development is good as well as the characters'. I saw some grammatical error but it's okay, I still enjoy reading the story anyways. Great work, author!
Something that stands out in this novel compared to the rest is the use of complex vocabulary. It gives it a sort of "fancy" edge to it which I personally enjoy. The only slight problem is the occasional grammatical errors however they are not to the point where the novel becomes unreadable. One last thing, I'm a bit confused on the uploading schedule but its a good novel so I'll be bias and give a full 5 star review.
Should I say that it good in one thing or should I say that it is better in another. Except for the updates, the whole thing is best. The naming style is refreshing. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp]
Very much engaging to the readers. The vocabulary is very captivating, Every detail in the novel was fun to read. The novel is very much never-wreaking as it is a very qualitative.
This is a really well-developed story. I love the world of Martial Arts the author has created here. The prologue opens with quite the hook with a blistering fight scene and the disappearance of a character, which I assume will be a mystery to be addressed in future installments. The book is filled with a great cast of characters, each with their own unique personalities. The protagonist is strong and has a never-say-die attitude that is quite appealing, especially in his big fight scene in chapters 3-4. And speaking of fight scenes, I really dug the author's style. Very tactical and well thought out, had me craving more. All in all, I think we're onto a winner with this one and I hope the author carries on with this story right to the end. Really entertaining stuff.
The concept of this book itself is very unique. It is intriguing, at the same time addictive. I love the pace and flow of the plot. A perfect binge reading material. Great work!!!!
ooooh this is a different approach! I like it! I have to search the word Bokken, and it amazed me! (Japanese wooden sword used for training in kenjutsu, for all the readers who are stopping by at the review section) anywaay, I really love the concept here! You should add more tags to attract more readers! Thats all I can say for now. Good job, author!