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it's the small snake that he got last time when he went to the Star Dou Forest.
Dugu Xin's mind wandered as he contemplated the possibilities. 'I wonder if I can claim the Sunset Forest as our clan's territory. Once I prove myself as the clan leader, I'll need to relocate everyone to the Hall of Souls. The Hollow Beasts Academy will also have to be integrated into the Hall of Souls. The spirit beasts there aren't too powerful, so Xiao Cai should ascend to rule the forest swiftly… Well, we'll have to see how it unfolds.'
Douluo Dalu: Serpent's Legacy
Anime & Comics · Night_Builder
Good idea. I'll try to post it this saturday.
ch 32 [Update]
Douluo Dalu: Serpent's Legacy
Anime & Comics · Night_Builder
Don't worry, for the MC I already planned most of his ss.
ch 32 [Update]
Douluo Dalu: Serpent's Legacy
Anime & Comics · Night_Builder
Close. In the donghua, if I'm not mistaken, Dugu Bo states that even if he expelled most of the poison there is still some left in his body. (i could be wrong, I'm too sure). Thus, since his poison is a lot more stronger than that of Dugu Bo's when he was the same age, it made sense that the effects of Xin's poison are stronger and harder to deal with.
Dugu Xin nodded, absorbing his father's instructions with determination. And so, another year slipped by, marked by relentless practice. As toxins coursed through his external soul bone, the New Year's arrival brought forth his first poisonous backlash. Agony unfurled within him, resembling the sensation of a thousand biting ants. His soul power surged erratically, and the Jade Phosphor Serpent Emperor roared within his consciousness, its eyes a feral crimson. Dugu Bo, behind the closed door to his room, listened to his son's agonized cries, providing silent accompaniment. As the night passed, the door finally opened, revealing Dugu Xin, exhausted, eyes red and drained. Dugu Bo extended his soul power to aid his son's recovery, whispering, "Good job, Xin'er."
Douluo Dalu: Serpent's Legacy
Anime & Comics · Night_Builder
yes. due to the poison, he needs a strong body and will to handle it, and he needs high physical strength to withstand higher aged spirit rings. So at this stage physical strength > cultivation speed
The moon cast its gentle glow upon the courtyard, where Dugu Xin and his father, Dugu Bo, stood facing each other. The air was thick with tension, their eyes locked in a silent battle of wills. Dugu Xin's resolve in obtaining a spirit ring older than 3.000-years was unwavering.
Douluo Dalu: Serpent's Legacy
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+1
3) Douluo Dalu Shared Universe (DD1 as main world x Jiu Shen x Mad God x Zither Emperor x Heavenly Jewel Change)
BTTH Life Simulator System
Anime & Comics · Kisshot
[Gu Mo - Spirit Bone Douluo (OC)]: Looks 20 due to a spirit herb he ate. He is actually 45 years old.
Douluo Dalu: Serpent's Legacy
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Douluo Dalu: Serpent's Legacy
Anime & Comics · Night_Builder
[Yao Jie - Lightning Lord Douluo (OC)]: 50 years old
Douluo Dalu: Serpent's Legacy
Anime & Comics · Night_Builder
While I would have liked to do that, if I remeber correctly the soul arena checks the soul power of everyone when they sign up. So he would have been exposed anyway.
ch 18 Ch.18: Last Day in Heaven Dou Imperial City
Douluo Dalu: Serpent's Legacy
Anime & Comics · Night_Builder
My mistake, I have modified that part now.
ch 18 Ch.18: Last Day in Heaven Dou Imperial City
Douluo Dalu: Serpent's Legacy
Anime & Comics · Night_Builder
Real Guard
When using Chat Gpt to help your writing I advise some for of editing the text because sometimes it creates long and stuffy description which shouldn't be there, believe I know from experience. And at the dialogue my best advice would be to write it yourself rather than let gpt write it, because it gives it makes it too mechanical and uses words which, in my opinion won't ever be used in a normal dialogue. I don't consider myself some great writer but I do like your ff and think that this will help, if you wish, to improve your writing. Now I haven't read past this chapter at this moment, and if area already doing what I spoke about above, awesome, if not I hope you do consider it.
ch 25 Unveiling Shadows
reborn as suguru geto (jujutsu kaisen)
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