Webnovel Author: Fexwind - Novel Collection

As the other comments have said, great prologue. The story seems promising so I'm certainly interested in reading more. The writing is a little awkward in places but that is to be expected. Overall, seems great.

Considering this is your first novel. I'm impressed. The novel appears very well thought out so far and the writing style is great. Obviously I can't rate everything completely accurately since it's only the first chapter but what I've read so far is great. That's all I have to say so far.

So far I'm enjoying this novel. The plot has great potential and I'm looking forward to it developing. The descriptions are great and put when necessary, something that I find vital in a novel. A few grammatical issues but they are rare. It appears to me that the author has been consistent with updates. I would recommend this novel.

Apologies for the late reply. thanks for the review. I upload weekly and am hoping to upload today if not tomorrow.

The lack of feeling us likely due to me being a novice writer and will be better with time. as for the superficial part. I am assuming this is due to the fact that the characters all seem to be really good looking and perfect personalities(almost). this is done for a reason.

I see! The plot will start to develop in the next chapter, the first was mostly to introduce certain characters.Yes he moved to a house in the same neighbourhood but the distance was substantially longer than what he was used to. I will try make that more clear