Webnovel Author: nXo1d - Novel Collection

This is a terrible novel in my opinion. The writing is completely wrong, the author messes up so often that you don't even question it after a few chapters. But that's not even the worst part of it, there is no real story, I may have left a bit early but I think 20 chaps is enough to tell it's bad.

Honestly I feel like people nowadays are fine with just any mediocre work This story is terrible, nothing properly connects, we are just thrown from one scene to another without any explanation and when writing these scenes it feels like he forgets all that he wrote in the past and just inputs new things without using common sense, frankly I think it's pathetic that I see only 5 star reviews.

it's truly a shame that jks decided to drop this absolute masterpiece, I have fallen in love with it even more than mvs and it's my favorite out of all his works, his new level up zombie ain't for me too, I wish he would work on this instead of thst

this is a copy of mvs through and through, the entire book is pretty much just taking ideas off of mvs and giving it his own spin on it, I hope you clarify that you at least got your idea from there

Well this is a great novel, very well thought out except the background characters don't react like normal people whatsoever, like I understand people like making rumors and exaggerating them but this is just too much, and the system although annoying is not too bad but I did not like it when he tried to cuck the mc, even if it is with a goal it doesn't really make sense since the system did try and get the girl to like him in the first place

it's alright, don't worry about it, I'm sure with time you will get much better

The story has a lot of potential, it is a great idea, but unfortunately has terrible execution. The fighting is explained terribly and the author makes a lot of mistakes, he forgets what he has written already, and English is clearly not his first language

Well, this makes absolutely no sense, 2 chapters in and the author replies to a comment which makes sense, and counteracts it, then a few paragraphs later, it says the opposite of what the author said, I was like ok fine moving on, and then he says he is like an mc who has no memory in a new body, even though he has a memory and was literally trained by 5 goddesses for a very long time, but now he Also forgers the basics, nah this is shit idk what the other reviewers saw in this junk

I'm gonna just rate it 5 stars as it's my book but uh I don't know if you will like it I hope you do I am trying my best and I am happy with what I have done so far.