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Marie has boosted gear? Issei still has it right? I just hope she isn't stealing it from him like every reincarnated person had done, i am tired and had with those plot

It will be more interesting if his sacred gears stealing plan failed Azazel taking Saji and Issei under his wings instead of Mc has multiple cheat code because that very overused and boring.

Overused Reincarnated as Riser check, overused Chinese villains Mc writing style check, overused system check, overused generic and predictable plot check, lack of originality check, *sigh* i don't want to be harsh, but can you atleast use your imagination and write something that doesn't look like copy paste with slightly edited story?

Rwason?

I'm more curious if Issei will become the victim of another bashing fanfics here, I mean author even went as far as making 6 year-old version of Issei here who still doesn't understand any sexual things even after being corrupted by both of his grandfather and old man in the park (atleast for the time being) become pervert bad enough to drive teacher to resignation and almost get himself transferred eventhough his sexual organs shouldn't be able function at that age yet, doesn't fill me with optimistic and fact that our hypocritically manipulative pedo Mc who aim for little girls hate Issei doesn't help too.

Lack originality, lack of imagination and being too repetitive, every characters are pretty much one dimension and every girls seems to be in love with Mc without any reasons even though Mc is just an annoying bitch who bitching at everything who would has characters worse than every original protagonists before that author deliberately ruin them degrades and change them into Oc scums here so Mc can cuck them and have harem, let leaving aside the fact that a lot of manhuas already using this plots, From what I've seen from other stories that this author that was writing more than 10 chapters except that genshin fic are all about the same inner voice bullshit EVERY STORIES!!!! Dear god, author is pretty much being just one trick pony at this point! have some imagination and stop trying to recycle the same thing over and over again!!!!!

Lack of originality, lack of imagination and on the top of that Mc go to kuoh academy?! jesus there are literally entire world of supernatural full of mystery and wonder out there but Mc had to come to Kuoh!?

This is perhaps the worst fanfic idea you ever make and how many time you gonna recycle this 'plot'? Have some originality! Seriously i almost don't see any difference in your stories except it has different 'protagonist' with the plot!

Lack of originality, lack of likable characters, canon characters get their charming points remove, and truth be told the fact that you install wuxia xianxia mind set bullshit in to Dxd characters make story became more dislikeable.