Webnovel Author: Runway_mistcat - Novel Collection

From the start when your reading it you can see the quality of the writing itd not bad but it's not good it could use some more work, and how we got off of how the MC became a pokemon was weak you start off with mc introducing himself than later his best friend then goes to the mall and dies that needs more detail into it, suddenly right after the MC dies he meets a God without any explanation then sends him to pokemon world, and more into it obviously I'm not going into this very much I'm just telling off. [ for the author ] this is by no means disrespect this story is better than most of stories please don't get angry in all I was just saying it needs improvement but not major, other tham that have a good day🙂

I hate this story and just started it to 😒 and first of all why is this story going so d() mn fast?! Like we start out with the MC becoming a baby bat good start right? Yeah then MC learns how to fly flew out a couple went looking for something to eat finds a human camp and start sucking the blood off the human?! Then they capture him now her and making them into a pet? Follwing a little later loves into a human to quickly I'm so done with this book and I don't care to read more this book anymore, this is literally cr@p and I quit