DereckESCL

4d

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More chapters please!!

ch 0 8 New Teacher

Deceit Chronicles

Fantasy · SunScar

DereckESCL

24d

Commented

Well, it's understandable about Cas but why Elizabeth run away??

ch 140 The Fall Of House Whiteguard (1)

Reborn as a Villain Destined to Die

Fantasy · SithLordAno

DereckESCL

24d

Commented

What?? Why not calista and elizabeth are members of his harem? Are they gonna be on the future or not??

ch 140 The Fall Of House Whiteguard (1)

Reborn as a Villain Destined to Die

Fantasy · SithLordAno

DereckESCL

29d

Commented

Is karl o Lucas? I mean I think The correct is Master Lucas but he is constantly named Master Karl

ch 0 3 The Emperor!

The Extra Wants To Live

Fantasy · Ink_Weaver122

DereckESCL

1mth

Commented

Account's name?

A/N: Newer chaps will be posted here until all the older chaps are reuploaded on the other account. FYI, probably through the discord the spammers have infiltrated the alt as well. I've decided… to not care. I'll still be making the transition to the other account. Anyway, happy reading.

The Hidden Dungeon in the World of Otome Games is Tough For Mobs

Anime & Comics · SentToOblivion

DereckESCL

1mth

Commented

Share The new name, please!!

ch 45 Read (Seriously)

The Hidden Dungeon in the World of Otome Games is Tough For Mobs

Anime & Comics · SentToOblivion

DereckESCL

1mth

Commented

is this dropped?

ch 0 2 Lin Qingyu is My Rightful Wife

The Greatest Urban Villain

Urban · Cruel_Death

DereckESCL

1mth

Commented

Dear Author, please more chapters.

ch 14 the academy.

Tenebris Renasci: A World of Magic and Gunpowder

Fantasy · Therealwaterboy

DereckESCL

2mth

Commented

Why did you erase the chapters? :c

ch 0 8 a new discovery.

Tenebris Renasci: A World of Magic and Gunpowder

Fantasy · Therealwaterboy

DereckESCL

2mth

Commented

New chapter please uwu

ch 43 explanations.

Tenebris Renasci: A World of Magic and Gunpowder

Fantasy · Therealwaterboy

DereckESCL

2mth

Commented

I like the story so far, it has been developing appropriately, however, it is not without its flaws. For example, with his family, not only did he not share many moments with his mother and he did not explain why, then what happened was also too fast and his subsequent anxiety attack in which he keeps repeating that it is not fair and it's always the same, but the reason why is not explained much until this chapter where it appears that he had a sister in his past life and so on. Other than that, the story has been developing quite well, if you want to continue it, go ahead, but if you want to make another story, continue with that, the important thing is that you feel comfortable with what you write.

So what do you all think?

Tenebris Renasci: A World of Magic and Gunpowder

Fantasy · Therealwaterboy

DereckESCL

3mth

Commented

I'm not one of those who like the MC to reveal his status as a reincarnate, this has already happened twice and I honestly don't understand the reason behind this decision. Having knowledge of a previous life gives you an advantage, yes it is true that it seems that Queen Charlotte also shares a second life, but that makes it even more imperative to hide it, why would she allow a child who probably has the mind of a adult is with his daughters? It would be too dangerous. Well, for now I'll keep watching what you plan to do with this sequence of events, dear author.

ch 18 meeting the queen.

Tenebris Renasci: A World of Magic and Gunpowder

Fantasy · Therealwaterboy

DereckESCL

3mth

Commented

To be honest, I don't know what to say about this chapter. I mean, for a half I think that two new potencial waifus has appeared but at the same time I feel sad because of Ava

ch 13 getting settled.

Tenebris Renasci: A World of Magic and Gunpowder

Fantasy · Therealwaterboy

DereckESCL

3mth

Commented

This chapter was surprising, I wasn't expecting a new chapter. I must say that so far it has been surprising, the twists, although somewhat expected since the war and his brothers going to war were mentioned, were expected, but that doesn't make it any less sad to see how Mc loses his family. The thing about Elize was something that surprised me, I didn't expect an older lady to love a child xd haha I guess the affection she has for him is not romantic, but I couldn't help but think so during that scene in the chapter. Honestly, it is the first fantasy novel set in the Edwardian era, here in web novel, that in itself adds points and the plot so far has been interesting. Now it's time to see how the Mc is going to survive from now on.

ch 13 the storm part 3.

Tenebris Renasci: A World of Magic and Gunpowder

Fantasy · Therealwaterboy

DereckESCL

3mth

Commented

Dear Author, the new chapther??

ch 0 9 the calm before the storm

Tenebris Renasci: A World of Magic and Gunpowder

Fantasy · Therealwaterboy

DereckESCL

3mth

Commented

Nice chapther!!! What's happening with his mother? Why she don't spend time with him and why she hate Charlotte??

ch 0 5 Alexander’s day out

Tenebris Renasci: A World of Magic and Gunpowder

Fantasy · Therealwaterboy

DereckESCL

3mth

Posted

This is the first review I will do, so bear with me if I don't really know how to develop it, however, I couldn't wait to do it because this novel deserves more recognition and reviews than it currently has. To start, if you are a fan of The Witcher Series and LOTM you will definitely love this novel, the character of Eleazar and his Witcher sequence is the best developed and his progression from weak to strong is quite refreshing to read, he is not all powerful from the beginning , but thanks to all the education he received from his father he manages to overcome his opponents who tend to be stronger than him and even when he becomes strong he is not at the peak of power but instead faces people who are as strong or stronger than him. stronger than him, which guarantees great character and personality development of the character. Fina is a character that at first may worry you with her secrecy and mystery, but she really loves Eleazar and how their relationship develops and the past they share is so great that I simply do not want to address it so as not to give spoilers, however, It is one of the best relationships that have been built throughout the chapters. The world is well thought out and developed throughout the chapters, especially since the protagonist is on constant trips to hunt dark creatures. The sequences with their respective powers and rituals are also, I must say that I am very surprised by the powers that the different paths presented have and their subsequent capabilities, their power system is also quite defined and is explained little by little throughout of the chapters. The plot twists and mysteries were what I loved the most, especially that twist between Eleazar, Fina and Evelea and how unfortunately they must separate, it was ufff...heartbreaking. It really is a well thought out novel that will be enjoyed by everyone and I hope you give it a chance.