Webnovel Author: Patrik_Crown - Novel Collection

Thanks bro, luv ur review! :3

Damn, I love it. The story, progression, everything. You wanna feedback? You don't need to, just continue to do what ya doin'... Writing quality is good, maybe a few mistakes here and there but the story covers them all so you don't even feel irritated at all... Development of the story has hooked u up from the start, where it flows slowly and perfectly. I like Soren's, sometimes humorous comments, and the world's background is well thought out. Overall, this story deserves more than just a few views. Continue in your work, I'll be watchin'...

I'm here for a review :3 So, due to having only 5 chaps, I can't give much, but I'll try... Right in the first chap, I saw some minor, let's say "mistakes..." But it's nothing that can't be fixed :3 Sadly, sometimes, I felt like... I was reading a newspaper article... It's not 'cause of the story but rather due to almost everything being glued together... Personally, after each sentence, I give a space and use a new line= "words that Mc or other character say" who said that and what expression, gesture, or tone they used/did. "And a new line"... "and again..." ..... ........ - space for the story... Mc might walk somewhere with others so I explain/describe that... Between that, I'll throw some dialogue again, etc... U know? Use some space, it will look better, and even when the story is not boring, after I saw those glued-up articles, I felt bored... trust me... It's our natural thing... We don't wanna read long and boring stuff... and even if it isn't boring, our mind already thinks that from just seeing it... But if you divide it, it will look easier and give your story more "space for breathing" as I say... Anyway, also, u might use some definition/boundary for your Mc's thoughts. "..." = Dialogue, things you say in our normal voice... '...' = This might be the sign for things your Characters say with their inner voice, thoughts they think about, etc... It will brighten your story a bit as well... [Don't take this as a criticization, rather understand it as a way how I'm trying to help u :3 ] And now the review itself... I really liked your story~ The writing quality is good [like your description style] and only saw minimal minor mistakes here and there... 5 fallin' stars for that :) Stability? IDK, I'm here for the first time and read this in one row- I'll give u 5, 'cause I can :3 Story development is a surprise tho, [for me at the very least], and I actually like that, but it's cut in the best [awaiting more] 5 for that... Character and World design and background are the same ... [Good yet I miss more chaps] [But 'cause I little roasted u at the start, I'll give u five... If not, I would give u 4] And that's it, hope u like it... Work on yourself and understand that the critique was necessary for your progress. I am glad I could read your story, see ya in the forum :3

Damn, this is something I didn't see on Webnovel often... Interesting plot, sometimes a funny MC [at least for me], and a world filled with intrigue... Looking forward to seeing more...

Damn, the first chap hit me like a truck... It was a long time since I read something sad, tho it was needed for the progress of the story. I love it, first chap hooked me up, and I let the story drive me through your work like a black muscle car through the town of Ghosts. Overall, due to not having enoguh chaps, I can't release a full review like I want to, but this story has a potential to shine... Don't let it go, this is your chance to prove yourself... I'll be watching...

I love this! Dark themes, psychological mind games, and questions that can pull your worst doubts out of your filthy mind~ If you are ready for some dark ride while finding quite interesting answers about your existence, check this out... But I warn you... It might give you goosebumps~

Thank you for your kind words~

Thanks, trying to hold the words at 2500 per chap. So that's why... plus I'm also cutting off useless stuff... But, again, thanks for support...

Thanks brother, I'll do~

As always, UelUel is here to make my day... Dang, do I even need to tell you that This Story Is F* Good?! If you don't trust me then choose to read it - [This belongs to everyone who is trying to skip it or read the reviews before diving into this masterpiece!!!] ------------------ Now's time for the actuall review. As always, Uel's sentences makes my lungs cry in pain while I'm dying from laughter... five for that... Stability? Even when I read this in one day, I trust, (just as with all your novels) that your stability is as good as I know it. Development? A cute Fluffy on his adventures... What can be more cute than that? = Five for that... Charcet design? Same as Development = Fluffy's cutness saves everything [5 for that] World background = I like the world where Fluffy secretly operates :) Five for that... Overal, PLEASEEEE CONTINUE UEL!!! I need more!!! <3 <3 <3

Damn brother, your review always makes my day. I feel like shit today, but with your review, and those comments, I'm going to release two chaps today, not giving a damn about the schedule. Just because of you!

Thank you for your kind words. I'll consider your words.

Only 3 chaps out there so I can't comprehend a solid review. Still, I'll try my best. Stability, I don't need to comment on that, same problems as I have :D Writing Quality is lacking in some spots, but with editing it can be fixed in no time. Development of the Character, Story, and the World is quite interesting for me, not gonna lie. Overall, a good story if you decide to give it a second chance...

Dang it, this really kicks in... I like the story progression so far as well as the main lead. Character design, world background, and story development have 5 stars. Some minor mistakes here and there but that can be fixed. Overall, good story~

Hey there. Because this story has only two chaps out, I can't truly appreciate the work as well as give a larger review. So for now, this is all I can give. Writing quality seems okay for me... 4 Stars... Stability of updates? I have problems with it as well so I will not judge that. Everyone out there has days when nothing comes to our minds. Story developments seem interesting, like the POV of the Protagonist in the sec Chap... The character design seems okay for now. To develop a character, you need more than one chap so, I can't tell yet if it's really good or nah... World back... seems good as well. For now, Hospital is the main target, while we had a small introduction of Ivory's ruined town with cleaners lurking around. All in all, the novels looks good for now, so what about adding new chaps?

I really enjoyed this short entertainment, the world looks interesting, the protagonist is fine, and overall, this journey seems to be on the right way. Awaiting more GeeGee!