Webnovel Author: Lacyan - Novel Collection

There will be 100%, though I wouldn't read it for that since it's like how cultivation novels go. Either it's a diluted harem, or there's no romance at all. Don't worry, however, if you're familiar with my previous novel—you will know my tendencies to write cringe yet endearing romance. (hopefully, I have the opportunity to write it here) As of the latest chapter, there's no romance still.

Thanks! I'm glad I didn't fulfill your male-fantasy wet dream—as I'm pretty sure you're life is filled with strong Chad energy that gets all the girls and is absolute trash when dealing with people, right? Nevermind, I forgot people like you don't have a life. Stop projecting yourself to MCs lmao, you'll never be as good as them. So either you don't read this at all or fill your ego with some other power fantasy.

Sorry for the late review! I finally can review this book. First off, I'd like to start by saying that the author's writing is pretty good imo. The wording of the sentences can still be improved upon though it's still enjoyable enough to be negligible. The plot is solid and we get to see lots of Intervar's thoughts. Though i've only read until chapter 5, but so far so good. If I have to comment on one thing—as this is my personal preference—is the lack of dialogue and the immersion of the novel. Where is Intervar situated exactly? What is Intervar's personality? Although the narration gives enough to explain his thoughts and general location, I would have preferred dialogue to fill that gap in—still, it's just my preference.

As the author, like everyone else, I will rate this story a 5-star. This novel will only be done at the side when I got some extra free time after writing Realm of the Transcendants—so expect irregular updates.

I'm also worried that was the first thing that popped into your mind... All I wanted to portray was how weak guys are compared to a the 8-year-old girl. :Skull:

I apologize for the late review! First off, I'd like to start off by saying that I don't usually read magical girl stuff—but I like the fact that the author is making a twist out of it. The characters speak their age and is actually quite refreshing to see casual language in a novel—not something you'd have to check the dictionary every second or two. There are things to improve upon, but you should definitely give this one a try.

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The inner monologue is very rich. This is a novel that feels relatable and is carefully crafted—attributed to the Author's vivid imagination. I have noticed that this novel was heavily inspired by other similar novels but it doesn't feel common at all. If you're looking for a rich first-person narrated novel, this one is definitely a read—It will instantly pull you with its appeal by relatability.

Keep up the good work—I can see that the author is putting a lot of effort into this. There are things to improve upon but the general premise is interesting.

eeggcellent 👌

I also have read countless transmigration isekais to know that this is not that different. Although, there are interesting premises such as "Turned into a monster" or "Became a sword", I personally prefer a simple approach in a unique concept. My motto in writing is "Unique Relatability", I want the story to be familiar (Not too exotic/esoteric) yet brings about that excitement of something new. Nonetheless—thanks for checking it out and leaving a review. Feedback like this gives me motivation to improve my writing.

Being the author, allow me to be shameless and rate this a 5-star. I am planning to take this novel seriously so I need a lot of exposure to gather feedback on how to improve my work. I enjoy writing—though I do admit I take pleasure in seeing my novel becoming more known—I mainly write because I genuinely love writing.

Oh yeah regarding Kaori, it wasn't more of her liking Naoki (in a romantic sense) but more of how she had felt alone. Her parents are away for work and she has to balance out her student council work, school, and hobbies. In short, she had just lacked a proper friend—which is why she became emotional that she had missed a potential bond. It's a weird thought—it's like "I could have gotten along with this person" kind of feeling I am planning to release an "Information and Technicalities" auxiliary chapter for those who are confused about the system. It is not required since I plan to weave the explanation into the dialogue—though it might be a great refresher for those who are confused or have forgotten. While it is implicitly told in the story—at the moment, the hierarchy of the goddesses and their subordinates is such: Elize (The one who sent Naoki, Kaori, and Minami) and the figure who inspected the two souls at the beginning < Anize, which is the direct subordinate of the goddess of Zenia < Goddess of Zenia. Lastly, Zenia is a world—not the universe. This will be further elaborated in the very far future chapters (Since there is more to be discovered in Zenia). Zenia is just one of the many worlds that is in that universe. (I've set it that way so it has limitless story potential)

The story is rich—which can be attributed to the author's vivid imagination. Every chapter is filled with immersion, as if the author witnessed the scene itself. It starts off slow, and can be lengthy—though it's not necessarily a bad thing as it helps build the world that tha author is trying to portray. If you want a novel with vivid scenes and eloquent words. You might want to check this out.