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ch 0 9 Seal part-2
Fantasy · eros_sachet
Thank You for reading this!
ch 0 9 Seal part-2
Fantasy · eros_sachet
Tyy!! This totally made my day, never expected this tbh[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
ch 0 7 Offer
Fantasy · eros_sachet
I actually like these little poems...very cute!
"One day everyone has to die"
Realistic · HelenaHomerHere
Hear*
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Realistic · HelenaHomerHere
again- its too long man-
I began to run as fast as i could, the large ice was still sliding down and it happened to be coming my way, i wouldn't want to follow another path or i would miss the way to khandland, so i had to keep on running. I ran fast as i could, the avalanche still rolling down the precipice fastly.And by now the floor began to crack all the snow blew up to the air. And the whole place became ice, i wish someone should just save me this instant. The ice also began to crack, it made me loose my balance and i fell, the whole ice parted into two halves. I was happy that it would fall into the river, but instead another ice was falling from ahead, i tried to run fast but the ice was too slippery, i decided to jump over the rock, i wanted to jump and alas the map flew out of my hands, i cursed myself for not putting it inside my satchel earlier.I had to guess the right way now, it was all the avalanche fault, i wonder why all these keep happening, until i saw a crooked tree and went to hide under it, the avalanche rolled away falling off the mountain and breaking down the ground.
Fantasy · Rainbowprincess
DONT DO THAT TO MY FAV BIRD-
I hated owls, not only because they are nocturnal creatures, but they are one of our enemies, and are always considered evil.
Fantasy · Rainbowprincess
You are doing great! 💗💗
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Fantasy · Rainbowprincess
Maybe keep the paragraph short, it will be easy to read-
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Fantasy · Rainbowprincess
heh real fun starts now
ch 0 3 An Intruder
Fantasy · Rainbowprincess
FL wants wool- but it's summer season?
I stood up and plucked out one mango from the tree, i had always hated this fruit ever since i was young but right now i have no choice.
Fantasy · Rainbowprincess
i think you can make the last sentence a bit better 'I just grew up and found that tradition' sounds off.
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Fantasy · Rainbowprincess
A whole paragraph out of a sentence- damn
I was shocked seeing mother and father's lifeless body fall to the ground, blood was oozing out mom's neck, while the sword thrusted out of father's back, i only remembered mom and dad telling me to take Kira and run, but right now i couldn't run, i had millions of thoughts in my head, who were those peoples, yes there were invaders but they looked strange, father had earlier sent his men to war, and most of the enemies were killed, resulting our men to bring the ones alive as slaves, and our kingdom became very popular and the best among all seven kingdoms.
Fantasy · Rainbowprincess
Ty so much for the review! [img=recommend]
Welcome back!
ch 0 9 Seal part-2
Trapped In His Wrath
Fantasy · eros_sachet