Really good first chapter! I was just somewhat confused with, "Lydia brought them to a stop." Who is Lydia?
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This is a great story so far and definitely interesting. The writing style is well done and easy to follow along. Keep up the good work I can't wait for the next chapter!
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I've really enjoyed the story so far and the pacing is well done. There are a few grammatical mistakes, but they are barely noticeable. Overall, I would recommend it to a friend and am excited for more updates. Please keep writing!
The Eidolon and I
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