"Please Hephaestus I am sorry forgive I won't ever cheat on you again if you start with me, and I swear on the Styx" Thunder followed her promise and the surprise from the Gods and anger from Ares.
Fantasy · SirZurone
Well the writers are adamant on keeping him young
(Look of Cashier)
Anime & Comics · SirZurone
It's Peter Parker and in the comics he has pulled a lot of heroines the only thing stopping him was the writers vendetta against him
Peter passed the money over with a wink and a charming smile to the cashier and picked up the bag of clothing, but as he was about to leave he was stopped by the cashiers voice, as he turned back he realised her face was flushed pink.
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ch 14 The Love Story and the Thunder and Lightning
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Energy started to swirl around her as the wind picked up around her creating a mini tornado as everyone struggled to keep their ground.
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ch 14 The Love Story and the Thunder and Lightning
Anime & Comics · SirZurone
I am getting back to it now
ch 0 9 The Chase
Anime & Comics · SirZurone
ch 14 The Love Story and the Thunder and Lightning
Anime & Comics · SirZurone
Oh did it discount?
He got into a stance and tensed his muscles that even for a two-year-old looks like a twelve-year-old"
Anime & Comics · SirZurone
That is a bit weird I might change it
Tears welled up in his eyes as he looked upon the innocent life he had nearly shattered. He understood now – his struggle, his battle, wasn't just about himself. It was about protecting those who couldn't protect themselves, showing them that even amidst the darkness, there was still hope.
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What?
Meeting Death Was So Bad
Anime & Comics · SirZurone
Hey do you have any suggestions on how I could fix his behaviour amd make him bit more likeable I see you have a critical opinon
ch 0 7 Suspicsions Increase
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Haha lol I guess it is pretty crap it's my first story and I haven't touched it other than when I have been incredibly bored. But I agree all the characters are out of character and I didn't know now to make a likable character
The Undefeatable (Male Reader x DC/Marvel Harem
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