Webnovel Author: Shafeereaves - Novel Collection

Thank you with your kind words of encouragement

I‘m giving you 5 because you got me hooked. I’m gonna continue to read and finish the story you wrote. This is very good from the very beginning to the end.

I like the story overall. It has great potential to become an anime or show. Keep up the good work because this story got me really interested in it.

Thank you for your feedback I will keep it in mind. I appreciate your support.

Kyle went from a nice polite person to a cold badass one I just wanna know if he’s going to die at the end because the Quadbrid he has to fight has no weaknesses

This is Interesting at first I couldn’t tell who the main character was but now I think I know. Keep up the good work, your story is really good.

Good job on your story overall. I like the pacing and the back and forth point of view for both sisters. Keep up the good work because this could be turned into a movie or show.

The story is overall good and the build up is nice. Maybe try building into the next chapter because it could leave people confused. Other than that you have some typos but your story is good.