Webnovel Author: Derrrorr - Novel Collection

1yr

Posted

I would say that your way of explaining is great. But there are so many spelling errors. The story was unique from what I have read till now. Good job. Keep it up.

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Fantasy · O_Vicente

Derrrorr

1yr

Commented

and there are many spelling and grammatical errors

ch 0 4 My Double Sex System

My Double Sex System

Fantasy · Sasa_Sawyerr

Derrrorr

1yr

Commented

Umm...the longer chapters would be better

ch 0 4 My Double Sex System

My Double Sex System

Fantasy · Sasa_Sawyerr

Derrrorr

1yr

Commented

Oh!! Interesting! But the beginning conversation killed few of my brain cells ×D. There were few mistakes, you should try proofreading the chapter a few times. The chapter was awesome!!

ch 0 1 The Encounter

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Fantasy · qurat_ul_ain4

Derrrorr

1yr

Posted

First of all let me congratulate you on surprising me in the first part. Who would guessed it was an rehearsal?! The story is amazing. The way you explain and narrate the plot is just amazing. I just want to be able to narrate just like you do. Unfortunately I have limited vocabulary. The plot got dark and then fun at some points. I couldn't read it completely because I am preparing for exams, sorry. Fun fact: I am just like the girl, with low self-esteem but I am a boy😂.

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Derrrorr

1yr

Posted

The story is awesome. it is not for someone as inexperienced as me to talk but your grammar needs a little bit improvement. My very first time reading a Romantic novel but it was awesome. I hope you could improve even more so best of luck.

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Urban · _Rockbison_

Webnovel Author: Derrrorr - Novel Collection

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(dropped bc I'ma publish it on Amazon)

My Double Sex System

My Double Sex System

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