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best HP FF i have read so far hope the author keep's up and does not drop I'm on c 46 and have to say the Mc is not a wimp like most ff's. to the Author is this going to be a Harlem because of all the houses he has ? if so please don't make the mc or females brain dead in romance

turn off your brain and read

a very good fanfic so far hope it does not suffer the same curse of twilight fanfics. (not being finished) I'm giving it a 4.2 because some the the story is confusing to me the OC names are to similar to each other that you can confuse them and the template is not explained well (i don't watch one-piece because its way to mainstream and overhyped to me) and the last update was a week and a half ago but that's ok the fanfic author has a life lo lol. well that my review hope the Author takes my review and fixes some things. (to author love the work so far hope you keep it up)

i did it was better then most ff i read just didn't like the gods involved made the ff waaaayyy off for me but i enjoyed it just the same