Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction

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ChaoticPlayer

I like your idea of naming him Peverell since the Peverells are one of the oldest families in the Wizarding World and Everyone knows which family is the true master of Deathly Hallows.😈

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Raptor2244

MC is a braggart Gary Stu young master and everyone else is relegated into three categories: bootlicker, girlfriend(or potential girlfriend) or enemy. If you like that kind of thing this is for you. I used to like this kind of thing and while it’s lost it’s appeal long ago for me I’m sure there are those who enjoy it. Lol MC is on the left, other characters are suit guy and author is on the right😂😂😂:

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Tim_QQQ

its too cringe. reads like a wattpad novel where the mc immediately goes to Gringotts and gets a bunch of noble titles and lordships. mc is addressed with 5 noble names or something at his sorting as he "struts forward confidently to the sorting hat as he is destined for greatness" ok bro, everything was handed to you congrats. everything is designed to make the mc look cool or mature but it doesn't work, he just seems like a delusional retard

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V_HPfan

Author please add Hermione in Harem🤞[img=Loving it]

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Insert_Here

you said do not read it so i will not read it

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Ifchickenandnuts

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Arcann_Valerious

It's bad. Very bad. Like scraping the bottom of a barrel with a broken rusty spoon bad. 1 star for writing quality, story development and character design, and thats cause I can't give any less. 2 stars for world background and thats just because Rowling already gave something to work with. 4 stars for stability of updates, though if the author will keep it up or simply drop it remains to be seen. 1.8 stars in total.

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Bravewolf

I'm Loving this so much it has great WQ, SU, SD, CD, WB, and everything thanks author so lets give this author around of applause and I will contiue to love this from now and in the future.

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

The fanfic novel is cringe, is Wattpad novel. MC femboy -> Gringott -> Mc femboy + billionaire + owner of old families -> end. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Dark_encheanced01

THAT'S ON MY TOP 3 FIC OF ALL TIME !!! no seriously this fic is fucking good (and you said you were 17 so i'm impressed ! (you did better than me at writing fic and i'm only 1 year older than you) anyway good luck and hope your life will be good in the future so you can continue this fic 👍

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Elemise

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Finnish_man

Is not good said about unlimited power of destruction and it was a scam i mean i have read fics where mc has very little power of destruction but was still able to destroy a universe or planet nothing like this has happen so sayin its unlimited is pretty bad also saying unlimited really should give the power of destruction ability tu destroy luck time space past future present conspets or or destroy door in way they never even exicted So would not recomend to see op destruction power its in no way unlimited

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alef_Rilzaki

It's a really fun story if you don't really get into the series and it holds your attention, I'd say it's worth reading. I think if it were written seriously it would be an epic story.

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yato_med

Do you know why great works like HP, Lotm, Got....are so successful.... That's because of balance. If you notice these works, you won't find a perfect MC who gets everything he wants and always does the right thing. And all the world revolves around it. And do you know why? Because the reader will not be able to get attached to the MC because there is nothing in common between them so that he can put himself in MC place and live the ROLE (English is not my first language )

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jonathan_santosmtz

No está mal, es un fanfic está bien 🫂👍 Si quieres pasar el rato y entretenerte es bueno, además es de la familia de las reliquias de la muerte ........................

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God_Of_Chaos

I really like this book, my favorite part of it is the MC like he don't give a f*** about anyone but the people he care about

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Emanuel_Alegre

Pediste revisiones y te la daré. Es interesante, me gusta. Si en una historia el protagonista es todopoderoso, entonces la historia debe ser entretenida o tener algo que llame la atención para que no sea aburrida y lo conseguiste bastante bien. Quisas algunos conflictos con los romances, no es que estén mal, sino que las reacciones de aceptación son un poco antinaturales, como muy fáciles. Me gustan los harenes bien desarrollados. La muerte entiendo que es por fuerzas superiores y no lo cuestionaré. Narcisa, bueno, me gusta la idea pero como que todo paso muy rápido y la relación ya fue demasiado bien sin complicaciones. Nymphadora, estuvo bien, pero la aceptación del harem me parece que debió tener un poco mas de conflicto, quisas un ataque psicótico de por medio o algo. No sé si Hermione será parte, espero que sí, pues me parece el mejor desarrollado en la relacion amor-odio inicial. Doy 5 estrellas para motivarte, no creo que sea perfecto, pero pocos hay que puedan decir que son lo mejor de lo mejor. Creo que este fanfic esta entre los buenos.

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Ashish_Kumar_1835

The bipolar mentality of the mc makes the character uninteresting. It halts the story progression in its beginning phase.